Took me 2 days to fully read everything and I love this fanfic. Hope you come back to update would love to see finished product.

Love this! Please continue it!

Well, I know its rather far into the story, and it has probably been mentioned before, but what's the ship name for Kevin and Rebecca?

Everything is enjoyable, awesomely written, but I have one thing to sat:
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How do you read MRLD? XD LoL
I keep saying Merald... or is it
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Emerald!

Yeah, I am new to the fic and even tho I have read only two chapters, I know I am going to love it.

This story has really got my interest, keep at it!

I thought this story was abandoned, I nearly forgot about this story... Good to see you are back!

Holy shit, I thought my email was glitching out when it notified me that this story updated. Good to see you back!

One-armed martial arts, eh? It seems you're a bit of a psychic.

OK, something I need to ask; just WHY doesn't Blake like Kevin? You've never brought it up other than "We're too alike to get along", which tells the readers absolutely nothing. One of the rules for writing is Show, Don't Tell.

Don't tell us the reason why they don't get along, show us. It suffers this with Weiss' dislike of Kevin as well. No reason and seemingly out of nowhere. You can say it's because Ruby dotes on him, except that Weiss pretty much had a low opinion of him right from the beginning, before Ruby grew close to him, so that's thrown out.

But Blake's relationship with Kevin is the worst part. She seems highly unlikable in her interactions with him and for no reason.

wow. five chapters into this fanfics and it feels nice. honestly i don't even watch RWBY, only know it from crossover fanfics. And even though you make that OC main story is not with the main cast, it still good. In a way that's brilliant because you can made up everything else regardless of what info will be revealed in next season of the series and it won't contradict.
anyway i'm just rambling, and so far your story is enjoyable.

"Beowolves are squishy." Haha, that made me laugh so hard. and for some reason, I keep thinking of MRLD pronounced as "merald" instead of "emerald". weird.

So I just read all 110 chapters in like 3 days. Impressive story you have here. Overall a really positive experience, but nothing is perfect and I do indeed have some criticism.

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1. Giving your OC dreams of the future - This came out of nowhere and was handled very oddly by everyone around Kevin as well, like he just told them he drank coffee every morning but actually likes tee better. Very underwhelming. Beside that however, it felt unnecessary. Smelt a bit of desperation to make your OC more important or interesting, which isn't needed. He has been interesting from the beginning. A very layered character.

That said and done though, you then seemed to forget about it, which both pleases more and... not. When they discussed the reasoning behind the research to widen the portals to other worlds, even going as far as mentioning Grim and Earth in the same sentence, yet no reaction from Kevin about his supposed vision about Earth being overrun by Grim.

2. The monster inside your OC - Like number 1, this also felt unnecessary. I think it was first mentioned in dialog between Kevin and David, and that was just cringey. "Not just anger, it's like a monster" (paraphrasing).

On the other hand, I really liked the resent climax in that story line, with the break in. The explanation regarding Aura Rage was kind of cool, because it made it seem integrated into the world, making the incident feel more "real" and makes your OC feel less like a special little snowflake. Only if you disregard the monster inside him though, which makes me dislike that even more. Now Aura Rage just feel like a gimmick instead of a part of the Remnant world. A shame really.

3. Lacking character development to most of team MRLD - Kevin is a really good OC. Far beyond that most on this site can brag above. However, this seems to have had consequences. Lily little more than a stand-in. 100 chapters in, and we almost knows nothing about her. David is in a similar situation but at least we have seen him grow semblance wise, but not much else. Rebecca had huge development, but only for a very brief moment in the beginning. That story arc was awesome though. Kodus for that, very cool. But after that, not much has happened.

In the lastest couple of chapters, Nyx has become much more interesting than half the team this fic is named after. That seems like a problem to me. She seemed very nonchalant about Kevin having killed someone. Where did she learn hacking? Why does she hide which kind of faunus she is? Interesting stuff. I don't have any similar questions about team MRLD, beside Kevin of course.
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All in all though, I really enjoyed my time so far. Number 3 is probably, to me, the most important to "fix", as the other two or more pet-peeves really. Number 3 is an actual problem I think.

Anyways, keep up the great work, and sorry up the wall of whining :-)

Well, now you've got me worried. If it had just been one person on the team that felt what I'll be thinking of as the 'shockwave' I would have passed it off. But everyone? Something just happened. Something important. And that worries me.

:D

A good chapter, I look forward to more. As for stories, I know I read too many, because I'm falling behind and taking quite a while to get to them :p
I was more talking about him trying to teleport somewhere that doesn't exist, or existed in quite a different fashion (Say into a hill), given your description it would just be disorientating, besides whatever might happen landing in things.