| Reviews for Apparent Lies |
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CrazyShipper101 chapter 6 . 5/2 Goodness gracious the PUN! *groans* You know what? Whatever, I don’t care. The fic was too good for me to even be mad |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/4/2018 Fantastic! You are good at portraying characters. Everyone had their flaws, but were easy to relate to. Also, great sense and timing of humour. |
Darkabyssoflove chapter 6 . 7/28/2017 I'm soooo late but cuuute! |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2016 Ahhh I love the title pun, it's perfect and bittersweet like the story. :D Amazing and interesting story! |
camry72 chapter 6 . 5/28/2016 That was cute...sequel? |
camry72 chapter 5 . 5/28/2016 lol |
Diurnal Days chapter 6 . 1/24/2016 I love this fic a lot. I love how well you portray m-preg without m-preg. And Rosemary is such a darling, I think she'd be a great child for America and England to have. I don't have much to say here, except that this is my all-time favorite m-preg fic, especially since it's mpreg without m-preg. I feel like neither America nor England are at fault here, both made mistakes that they eventually resolved. If you ever write another fic featuring Rosemary Jones-Kirkland, I'd snap it up in an instant. But if you've already have, well, I guess my birthday is a week early, lawl. |
takuya chapter 6 . 1/16/2016 aww that was cute, I loved it. |
AiriRoses chapter 6 . 1/4/2016 This was so cute! |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/2/2016 Poutine is the best food ever and I'm not Canadian |
ArkieR chapter 6 . 6/30/2015 Oh, GOD, that title pun… I'm torn between laughing my head off and bashing my head against a wall. XD This is such a sweet fic. |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/13/2015 omg a parent lies its genius |
Lunar Iris chapter 6 . 2/3/2015 I have enjoyed your Wilde chapter heading quotes. Very chuckle worthy. And your "ridiculous fic about serious issues", which isn't so ridiculous, because ... this was one of the cutest fics ever. "Tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies" kept going round in my head, though. Thanks for writing such a great story that kept me up over an hour past my bedtime with no regrets. |
Lunar Iris chapter 2 . 2/3/2015 OMG! I really do try to wait the for the last chapter to comment on completed fics, but I cannot believe you went there! *squeals!* I really like your proposed head canon. And, this Floridian loves British West Florida! No one ever really thinks of it though. I see it as a wide-eyed (green-eyed) eager little darling. :D |
ennflor chapter 6 . 1/22/2015 Wow. Honestly I didn't expect the story to get so... well, rather dramatic, to be honest. I thought it would be completely a comedy and while it did have its funny moments and it was kept kinda light (like there wasn't any heavy angst or anything) and had a happy ending, it was different from what I expected! :O The beginning was pretty humourous, I honestly expected it to stay this way. But yeah. I totally got into the drama eventually. Like when America's lie was discovered and everything went to hell, it did give me some emotional pain. :') And some other moments, too. When America found Rosemary and England wasn't answering, I kinda already knew what happened. I also didn't expect them to actually have a child eventually. To be honest, normally I'm not very into this kind of stuff... children, families and all. Just my personal preference. But gotta admit... Alfred as a daddy is adorable! :O Makes me want to give him all the hugs! 8D Rosemary was pretty cute, too. Somehow I was afraid that it'd turn out that America /accidentally/ took someone else's child... omg I'm glad it wasn't the case, haha. Also when she got lost I got worried because I started thinking that what if something went wrong and the whole thing with the micronation was cancelled and Rosemary just stopped existing? And America wouldn't have a chance to even see her one more time after she got kidnapped as well as England after finding out she's really his daughter? And neither of them would get any sort of closure. Or, before England called America and informed him that Rosemary got lost, I thought that what if America cancelled everything somehow and Rosemary stopped existing and America did it on purpose thinking it was for the best and eventually he and England really weren't going to be together anymore. Basically my mind is good at coming up with some terrible scenarios, haha. But oh am I glad everything ended so well! :') And Canada is wonderful, being one of the so very few people to support America. As for 'who's wrong in this situation', I think you could look at it from so many points of views! Definitely kidnapping Rosemary seemed too much to me. I do get why America couldn't stop with his lies and I get why England got so upset, even if I felt so bad for America when England broke up with him. However, the fact that England thought America kidnapped a child... I don't know, it's kinda understandable, yet at the same time I'm pretty sure America wouldn't do that even if he put it on the list. He's silly and he was being silly with the list too. I know if I was making a list of something I'd very likely write some stupid things there too. :D So like it kinda upsets me that England actually assumed something terrible about America. And I disagree with England deciding to look at files on America's laptop. Jeez, England. Ever heard about privacy and personal stuff? Wtf bro. Anyway. Yeah, the story was unexpectedly dramatic and actually made me emotional and there were some tears. :') But it's also kinda sweet. I really liked the story (and also liked the pun in the title though I didn't notice it until I saw the note at the ending) and the drama totally got me and I kept reading because I really needed to know how it'd end, haha. So yeah! It was pretty great! Wonderful story! 8D |