That was adorable!

Très jolie histoire ! Dommage que la fin soit baclée ... Cette fanfiction a si bien démarré .
Bravo tout de même pour l'imagination ;) et MERCI pour nous fan de SKIP BEAT

what is saena up to? Please don't let kyoko be fooled by her.

You did an excellent job. Thank you so much . Hope to see more from you in the future.

Well this is a lot better then others where she denies even having a daughter. Good job.

I loved this story line. I would love to see you make one about their lives together and how Ren proposed and everything. It would be great!

This was an enjoyable story. The pace was a bit fast, but it's to be expected since there are only 16 chapters. For the pace to be a bit slower, more chapters would be needed to draw it out some. It does seem you struggled a bit towards the end as the last 3 or 4 chapters at some points looked like they were ideas that were tossed together somewhat loosely, but overall you did a good job. I think you'll get much better with time and experience. Your work is some of the better stuff out there. I've read many other stories that I just couldn't understand or were just badly written. So thank you for sharing. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

aw.. so sad it ended like that. GOOD JOB THO, THANKS FOR THE GREAT FIC

looking forward.. to the next chapter

thanks1!1

nice. i dont wanan let it go :(

Hermoso !

Loved but I don't want to let it go

Gostei muito da fanfiction! Parabéns! Eu me pergunto se haverá um epílogo nessa história? E com certeza acompanharei suas próximas fanfictions de Skip Beat! *-*

Good chapter :)