This was very enjoyable. In ways I’d like to see the chaos, rivalry and damage they could cause if they all came together. The over and underworlds would tremble.

My gosh this was amazing, I wish there was context to build on this

Holy crap I loved this!

To be honest, if you expanded this i wouldnt mind readin this

I was a little disappointed in the Yang scene. Everyone else is evil and she's just brainwashed? Feels a bit like a cop out.

I really enjoyed this espeasaly Weiss and Blake.

Damn i have always wanted to see how Weiss will be like villian and it was awesome , there should be more evil Weiss

This fic is fantastic and brilliant! I love how the team RWBY was portrayed in this. The portrayal of the members of team RWBY and their character concepts showed some originality and finesse (Especially Weiss'). the only downside is that it's a shame it's a oneshot fic, otherwise it would be a good multi-chapter fic taking a different spin on team RWBY, being a potential criminal organization that would take on Beacon and take over Remnant.

P.S. In Weiss' scene, was that an allusion to the film "The Incredibles?"
P.S.S. ZWEI!

quite good

I. WANT. MORE.

You've made this intriguing and interesting...and now I wanna see more of this

Ohhh this is really good. Loved the way you portrayed them, especially Weiss. I never pegged her for a villian but you wrote her perfectly. Hope you write more of her. Love your writing style too. Great job!

that was. . .very interesting to say the least.
i have to favorite this if only for the reason of being to be able to find it again

This was really cool. If you ever decide to continue this, I'd definitely want to see where it goes