Reviews for What Doesn't Submit
Katy chapter 1 . 11/2/2019
I love this
BeautifulSamurai chapter 1 . 2/18/2019
Ohhh! This was clever, funny, and sexy all at once! So fun to see Natsu being so in character but also outsmarting Lucy here lol Short and sweet haha
xxtoughcookie chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
SHES HIS RIDE
quite-a-riot chapter 1 . 3/7/2017
this is hilarious...and an interesting topic to delve into. I actually laughed out loud when I read that linewhen she's his ride" oh my god, such a Natsu logic thing to say!
alydragneel chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
She's his ride omfg omfg Natsu since when did you get so freakin smart and just smooth?!
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
I love a dominating Natsu~!
PinkFireandGoldenStars chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
Well that was hilarious! Lucy's mind goes weird places and this fic certainly outlines that. I loved it! Especially how cute Natsu was and then how mischievous he was at the end. :D
AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh that was great! Thanks for writing, I loved it!
-kitty
sthokat chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
OMG, "SHE'S HIS RIDE". THAT IS SO TRUE
sailorlyoko4life chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
That was beautiful! and hilarious!
Bemer2001 chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
I never even thought of it this way, I would have answered the same that Lucy had answered in this story but after reading Natsu's argument I definitely have to agree. Although that just brings to mind dirty thoughts of edo- natsu hehe ;P, keep going girly! Your doing great! Your a fantastic writer and a beautiful person! I can tell by the way that you write that you are gorgeous soul!
B-positive129 chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
i want edo nalu showing the answer please
Kaycha chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
I think you are right that Edo-Natsu is dominate in bed. I have more of a dominant personality but we it comes to the bedroom I like my man to be dominant.
Twishadowhunter chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Nicely done!
Tabbykatroses chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
Damn, just damn, he said so sexy, I'm just like here's the keys to my ride, if you know what I mean.
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