Bro that was fucking sad amazing story bro

This story is seriously underrated. It is brilliant.

This is great. I love the fact that you keep the character's persona the same, making it much more interesting.

Pretty good. I liked it

The chapter posted twice?

Just so you know, you posted the same chapter twice

This story is really interesting. I'm curious of how the of how Ahsoka and Grievous' friendship will be affected by recent events and how it will affect Grievous' mission for revenge. Can't wait for more! I love this story & check for updates everyday! :) ( I would have reviewed when it was updated, but shy anon is shy)

The interactions between Grievous and Asoka are hilarious and very in character. I love this story and can't wait for more!

Seems like our good general is going through a crisis of the heart as well as of the mind. It's amazing that none of these questions he asks have never been answered in any media I've read or watched, and I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who has an interest in seeing them answered.

I do wonder what will become of Ahsoka if or when Grievous decides he's finished with her and the abilities she possesses, if indeed that is how this ends. He obviously hates the fact that she reminds him of his long lost love, but I also wonder if that will make him keep her around if only because of that while hating to admit to himself that he actually likes having a reminder of a better time in his life.

So many questions, but I look forward to seeing some of them answered in coming chapters if you do intend to do so. Great work and keep it going.

Interesting chapter. Keep writing!

This is gonna get interesting!

Very nice chapter and an interesting cliffhanger to boot. Many of the times in the show we see the Jedi get the better of Greivous in situations such as what was portrayed here, but on this occasion he came across much better as the battle hardened genius he was always meant to be. Sure, his little bouts of sarcasm are a little out of character for him, but that's the whole point of the story, to show him in a different light.

I have a good guess as to what the plan is for the coming chapters with the ending going as it did and I look forward to seeing how Ahsoka will fit in with what's to come. Keep up the great work.

Okay, another good chapter. I found it interesting to see the Force dream's effects on Grievous' connection with his body. Let's see what happens next!
Keep writing!

I actually enjoy reading Grievous as something more than the mindless cyborg some make him out to be. Sure, he was ruthless and a perfect killer, but there are two sides to every coin and I like that your version has somewhat of a conscience, much like the canon version had before his accident and rebirth as the leader of the droid army.

It will be interesting to see what more comes from Grievous' would-be friendship or perhaps simple association with Ahsoka, especially once the Jedi arrive. The pair never really had a definitive end to either of their duels in the show, so maybe we'll see who would actually be the winner, or maybe they'll part with a new found respect for one another as warriors when it's all said and done. Either or whatever way it turns out, I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

None of the Grievous stories I've read here come close to comparing to this one. Fantastic work.

A writer who researches the main subject of their story and misses little detail is hard to come by these days, but you've done an excellent job learning about Grievous' past and explaining it in a way that even readers new to him can instantly pick it up and understand, which is a great trait to have.

I look forward to seeing what you have planned next for both the general and Ahsoka. Keep up the great work.