| Reviews for The Fall |
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   Besilea chapter 1 . 4/15/2018 Hope for more soon! |
| Chelsietx chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Awww - very nice! I'd read more. |
| NEGirl chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 Excellent job, especially for your first! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 Lovely |
| Canadianjudy chapter 1 . 9/1/2016 YES! Of course I found this two years too late but, YES, you should continue it! What a silly question! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2014 I loved this! Please continue, it would be great to see how they cope with their love and work. |
| OJBF3 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014 I think you should continue. It's a great start! |
| klswhite chapter 1 . 10/18/2014 Well done start. Hope you continue. |
| LC chapter 1 . 10/15/2014 Fabulous first! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2014 Love this! Please continue it! Can't wait for another chapter |
| Tori chapter 1 . 10/15/2014 Ohhhh this was so good. If you want to continue it..I say by all means please do! But if you'd rather not cause it was just too good..then I'm sure we all will obey your wishes haha. |
| ozz chapter 1 . 10/15/2014 oh yeah! defenetly! I loved it |
| Mona Love chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 Angst, drama, and romance. A wonderful combination. Please do continue on :) xo |
| Chelsie Dagger chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 I shudder to think what would have happened if she had fallen, but I shudder even more to think about what might have happened if she hadn't tripped. Such emotion is pretty uncharacteristic of Elsie BUT with all the secrets she's carrying, I would not be surprised to see something like this on the show. It's very believable and my heart just ached for her. It's wonderful how he hears the ultimatum in her voice and fears losing her, but it is his shame at hurting her that really drives him to action. Do what your story tells you to do. Some stories are sprints and some are marathons. They are all enjoyed and appreciated. If you do continue, I will say that I had an instant dislike to Mr. Holstrom . Like Charles, I'm rather territorial when it comes to a certain housekeeper;) Very well done, adding that small detail that upped the tension considerably. |
| Lindsey Grissom chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 Oh that was so lovely! I could feel everything poor Elsie felt and then Charles realising this was his last chance and he was going to lose her if he backed away now. Perfect. I hope you do continue this, but even if you don't this will stay a lovely little reveal-fic. I can honestly say that everyone in this fandom is so encouraging and friendly, I hope you stick around a while. I can't wait to read more from you! |
