Darn writer's block! I hopre it goes away soon because i can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Name: Charlotte Johnson
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: Manipulative. She is shy and "little". But she tries to act older than she actually is when she tries to impress someone.
Facial Features: Dirty blonde hair, small nose, dark green eyes.
Body Features: Similar to tris, but still a smaller build and strong.
Height: 5'5
She lives moves to Chicago, before tris comes back, after hearing tris talking about 4.
She comes from Florida and is a minor victim of the hurricane.
Tries to be friends with Tobias, Will, Zeke, and Uriah
Enemies with Christina, Tris, and Marlene
She wears tight fitted clothing( too tight) but wears amity colors.
Is in the Maity faction, but would have an apptitude test for dauntless. Not divergent

Nice! This is cool. Keep updating!

mia richards
female
19
bold, strong, brave, fearless, cocky, cunning
curly brown hair emerald eyes that are big and round
5'5
flordia
loves neon clothes
red cross job

Heyy i love this story, just discovered it. Awesome so far, u got me hooked. I would love it if u used my character but if not its ok :)
Lily rose
Female
21
Shy, reserved, timid and nervous but very passionate about the red cross and will step up and help people despite her shy nature when push comes to shove.
Shiny red hair that is very straight and wears it up alot. Round large crystal blue eyes
Average weight
5'6
Flordia
Works for red cross

this is the 1st chapter

I really liked your little Author's Notes during the story. They made me giggle.
Can't wait for more.

Just to be sure... Is this a Fourtris story or nah!? I am a total Fourtris fan!

*wiggled eyebrows* so mar and Chris get some alone time with four while will and uri and tris r in florida *wiggled eyebrows again* that could lead to problems... I like it

I love it ! Keep writing! The first chapter was amazing!

Hey! This seems really good! I can't wait for more! I lived in New Orleans when Hurricane Katrina hit. Even though it's not Florida, I'd be happy to answer any questions about it if you want! Update soon! :)