You know, I take back wanting a rewrite.
Damn it's a shame that this version, despite its many flaws, is 100x more superior than whatever bs it is you're working on over at spacebattles.
I genuinely can't fucking stand litRPG stories where the system actively hinders the MC. It's not funny, it's a drag, it's an artificial way to make the MC struggle, it's outright retarded to do as a writer. It would be so much better to just take the system, make it behave like a normal rpg system, and place it in a weak as fuck body so the MC has to deal with an escort mission through the entirety of their adventures to be capable of growing stronger, because while the system hinders the MC it doesn't do it because "lmao sassy system funnie xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD1!1!111!1!11!1!1!". But rather because it's a weakness in an otherwise seemingly unbeatable character.

Really nice to see that that stuff has been implemented before I even thought of it!
Oh yeah, forgot to mention:
Why the fuck did he spend his stat points already!?
Also, he's gaining power far slower than Jihan Han, who had no foreknowledge on his powers.

I forgot to mention that it's nice to see that money finally started dropping.

Oh, and you forgot that he has "Gamer's Eyes" turned on, which gives him the name and level of everyone in his field of vision. Probably also a HP bar, now that I think about it.

I personally feel it'd be a lot more interesting if instead of bringing in mysterious characters that are related to the MC's power, you'd introduce more figures that could belong to the Bleach verse, whom all are, at minimum, as strong as the head captain, and buff the royal guard's powers up to exceed the hype surrounding them, and other such things to bring the future challenges for the MC to not seem like a shitty fanfic but the flex of a skilled writer proficiency in their art.

ah, there's the loot.
However, there's yet to be money. Every ID creature drops money no matter what upon defeat.
Also:
"Magic's basic but deadly skill! [Energy Bolt] has been created!

[Energy Wave](Active) Lv1 EXP 0.0"

Why did the zombie not drop any loot?
It should've dropped loot if it were an actual "Instant Dungeon" from "The Gamer"...

"An invisible clocking skill"
clocking
It should be cloaking, but otherwise it's a great chapter, with the exception being that I hate when stories start with a focus on someone that's not the MC.

Crits are generally either x1.5 or x2 damage. So if energy bolt is doing over 100 damage normally, then a crit should do either 150 or 200 damage.

Kinda nice so far but pretty slow. I feel like it’s a play-by-play of a more survival-based game rather like ark or Minecraft than an rpg-style that is normally in these kinds of fics.

I genuinely liked this one better than the rewrite, sad to see it go.

Well seems like the MC isn't that smart by revealing all of his powers. I hope he isn't going to power level people in his ID create or start magically creating skills/items or try playing fix-it.

Wow that was really stupid on how he introduced himself. Revealing his abilities like that... would get him killed easily considering the MC could be mistaken for Aizen's grunt. I hope he tries playing it off as a fullbring power.

Huh, kinda liked the start but it quickly degenerated to usual gamer trash. The unnecessary revelation, the constant bullying, the no advantage/help coming from them. I'd love to read about a unique gamer, a homeless gamer surviving and doing his best to become more powerful. But so far, it's just stupid decision after stupid decision, really I'm disappointed.

Just saw the reviews and found out that it was cancelled hahha hilarious.

I really did not like the whole party thing since I can already tell you are going to have him use it to make everyone else stronger meaning revealing to even more people about his powers. I mean even just Urahara, Tessai, Jinta, Ururu and Yoruichi because its imposibble for Urahara to not have told her about it are way to many already. The way your going the entire cast will know about them that means what atleast 50 people. Its annoying as hell being able to already predict how this story is going to go in the incoming chapters.