That Blind Guardian refrence though (ironically I was listening Skalds and Shadows when I saw the lyrics to Mirror Mirror)

i hope this gets intresting

Yea plz update

More Please, pretty pretty please~ I really love the story and want to see where it goes

Damn, that government chamber sounds more like royalty than confinement... Ahh, if only the government had the mental capacity to actually do something to help the world... That'd be nice... Good story BTW!

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

Liking it im hoping it will be continued

I'm curious to see where you take this!
-Aidis

Wow. Nice backstory.

The story is getting more interesting by the chapter. Can't wait to see the gang reunited

like this. Different, well hyped. Good

Wait, how old is Ruby now, I got confused.
Is she now 15 or 18?
and i think the song is Mirror Mirror?

I liked it, but it needs more. maybe longer chapters? oh, and I didn't really see anything wrong with your story, or the spelling, but the grammar could do with an upgrade...I think that
's the right word.

anyway, I want to see more really soon, and I can make you a promise that I will support this story wherever it goes.

SO, when Ruby speaks, people die? Reminds me somewhat of Eu Hellscythe from Kore wa Zombie Desu Ka? Anyway, I like the darkish setting of this story, though you might want to actually find the line break button on the doc editor. (FFnet has a nasty habit of losing formatting when you upload and/or copy/paste). Other than that, keep it up:)