thanks for a very good read enjoyed it

Great story of their beginning of a relationship.

Thank you so much for that beautiful story, I've really missed a moment like that in the new episode, the fear so well expressed, it's delicate, bravo.

Best line: "Just get right back on that horse." I"m still chuckling. Hubba hubba.

I truly love this! Especially the dynamic of the story with the flashes into the future (or would it be flashes back into the past?) :D

Beautiful and sweet and sexy. As always amazing!

I love it how you incorporated a glimpse to the future along with the immediate events following Blue Bird. Perfect heartwarming story! Thank you so very much for sharing your talent with us :)

What can I say Entwife, this is just how I've imagined this second chapter! simply beautiful, a very pleasure to read. wonderful writing! Thanks a lot for granting my (and of so many others, I'm sure) wish ;)

Thank you for adding this beautiful second chapter! Don't we all wonder sometimes, what our life would be, if... ? I'm so very glad, Teresa chose to go with Patrick - it won't always be easy, but as long as there's lots of good make-up- they'll be fine, eh? ;-)

Just loved it.
Chapter 3 please asap.

Nice continuation. Good to read of the culmination of their start as a couple, as lovers, to happily committed partners-lovers-spouses. Communicates the sweet future unfolding before them. Thanks.

That was so sweet, Entwife. Loved how tender they were to each other and overcame their fears. Easy to imagine this as their first time and how it happened. Beautifully done. You really make the hiatus easier to bear, Entwife.

Beautiful! I want the final part at the series finale! Thanks.

Hi ent! I think that chapter might be from another story :p
No problem tho, just wanted you to check it for yourself.

Thanks! (:

That was bloody fantastic. :-)