| Reviews for Knowing: Wind Beneath His Wings |
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AvidMind chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 It's sweat, I swear! It's manly sweat...sure it's coming out from my eyes but... I always wondered about Raven and Rena. The fact that elves do not age, or at least not as quickly as humans do, made me think of how their story would end. This pretty much sums up my best guess. I love the bittersweet feeling of this story... One question: is Elsa Rena's daughter, or is she Elsa as in Elsword's sister? If she is Rena's daughter, would she be immortal too? Or would she be semi-immortal? I personally didn't get this... 또 좋은 작품을 보게 해주셔서 감사합니다. 힘내세요 작가님! 아자아자 화이팅! |
lLegendsl chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 Wow. This got me all feely and stuff. Expected nothing less from you, but... I'm just going to walk to that corner over there. I'm not going to feel sad or anything, much less cry. An eternity of bawling later... You impressed me with your writing before and you keep doing it now. I just find it awesome that you manage to keep such quality stories without giving off any sign of tiredness as you keep going. I was going through my stories and I couldn't help but feel like with every passing chapter, there was a lower amount of... 'spark?' ... in each one. GC is dead, but I really feel you could move your talent and skill into Elsword and continue to make stories with depth and meaning. Hope to see more! |
Jetstream Girge chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 An emotionally tumultuous story that illustrates the blessings and curses of a seemingly infinite lifespan. Seeing how Rena copes with her spouse's decline is heart wrenching and entirely realistic. Your portrayal of the characters has always been a highlight of your work and perhaps my favorite element that you employ. While it is regrettable that your drive to write has seemingly dwindled, I sincerely hope that this is not the last we will hear from you. I really hope you continue writing as this archive needs authors like you to keep the archive stocked with actual stories. Until next time! |
asamiruria chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 This is absolutely beautiful. I can feel Rena's grief in that she knows her love will soon be gone from the world, while she lives on. That she indulges and humours Raven's delusions emphasise it more. You've presented an extremely realistic and emotional piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I'm glad to know there are still authors like you in this - dare I say - deteriorating fandom. |
Siilver Phantom chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TT_TT I CANT DEAL! * * HAAALP MEH! Coughcough... that was really really good, you're a very talented writer :D It was written very well, but seriously, my emotions hurt though ;-; poor Rena...i cant deal with this pain t-t so good though :D |