you may not be a native English speaker but I honestly find this easier to read than a fair few English people's writing that I know

very good i love it hope there are more soon or later!

It's fun, I hope you will continue this story.

Is this still updating? Please say this still updating! This is too good to end (and I REALLY want to know how that phone call to the homicide department ended up)!

You are so mean to leave us hanging like that...pleaaaaaase come back and update/finish the story

This story is really interesting, I read it in one go and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
I really want to see Shinichi solving the "flower riddle" and I wonder, who he was talking about, when he mentioned a person in the hospital... did something happen to Ran?
Anyway, I hope you update soon! :D

Yay, heist note deciphered! One thing though, I thought that Megure and Nakamori were both part of the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Deptartment? I always thought they just didn't interact as much because Megure was head of Division 1 (homicides and stuff), while Nakamori was with Division 2 (organized and white collar crime)... Ah well, pay me no heed, no one'll yell at you! It was really funny imagining the police officers' faces when Shinichi explained the note! Nakamori's portrayal was good too! Great job and update soon!

I really liked this chapter! Especially how Shin-chan baffled everyone hahahaha. I loved the line about how the task force felt like they should applaud him XD Oh and the jewel sounds beaut! You have a beautiful imagination!

Updates please!

well now he just needs an in with aoko to have nakasan like him more. kai;s a bit of a perv huh sneakin into peoples rooms to stare at them as they sleep xd

I just read the whole story again! I'm excited for what happens next, I'm glad Kaito got himself up! I like how awesome Shin-chan was with Nakamori Hahahahahahahahaha oh and your riddles are really cool, I'm just not very clever XD oh I noticed that you keep saying sighting but what I think you mean to say is sighing. Sight is a sense, like seeing. A sigh is when the puff of air leaves your mouth. Anyway, I'm really excited for the next chapter, this story is interesting,

Ooh, can't wait to see what Shinichi's figured out! The riddle is really interesting... I guess we'll see what it means soon! We can all agree that exams suck, but I hope you have a fun time in America when you come! It's nice here! I kind of promise! :D

Gosh, this is so cute! :3
But I must ask you a question (you don't have to answer if you don't want to, as I believe the answer will be given as the story goes on). Which one do you think is cuter, Shinichi or Kaito. The answer, sadly, would influence my opinion of this story.
Can't wait for more!

Coolio! I completely understand about being busy so don't worry!

Shin-chan can't survive without coffee, can he? hahahahaha

I'm really surprised that Shincihi's pride allowed him to ask Kaito that! But now he's closer to figuring it out! You also seemed to have a lot of grammar issues... Ah well, thanks for posting and update soon!