Ooh you have me on the edge of my seat! I do hope you plan to continue this fic, it had (or has, rather) a gripping storyline and better grammar than many, if not most other stories on the browsing page.

Awesome. I really love this story ! Its Good !

I'm really enjoying this and I hope you plan on continuing this.

Oh come on I can't wait any longer please update I think there are unbelievably cute and can't wait for the next update please please please please please please please please update xx

Love the story, keep it up!

I really like this story. Good luck with the next chapter.

Dang, I was really starting to get into this. :D

I love this Victoria. She has style, interrupting the funeral/mourning like that. :P

Update soon!

- LA

Good good as always can't wait for the next update x

Please update!

Please continue!

I like the interactions between Snow and Bigby so far, too.

Love it but when is the next update up I can't wait xx

I can understand maintaining in-character characters is difficult, but you're doing wonderfully! No worries! And I'm glad to see a quick update from you! I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last.

I'm now more than ever curious as to what Victoria wants with the baby. I love the interactions between Bigby and Snow so far too!

Keep up the great work!

- Asphodel

Honestly, this is pretty damn brilliant if you ask me! I feel like I'm watching an actual continuation of the game-play.

I do hope you update soon! Everyone is in character! I love the plot of this and I'm eager to see where this is going! Gosh, really I am excited! :D

- Asphodel

I like your history plis continiu

Great story!