Wow! This was perfection ! Please please write more !

This one-shot was awesome. So well written very into the characters and all but at the end i was like wtf! I just felt it was cut off so abruptly.. like it was missing an extra sentence or something. Anyway it was so good! Really enjoyed this piece of art, i wish we could get this but with Peters point of view on everything. Love this pairing its extremely hard to find good fanfics for these two but ur one of the best!

It's so hard to find good Petris, but you nailed it. Really hot, and excellent writing. Kudos! And thank you. :)

At first I thought I wouldn't like it at all, because even though it could have been plausible, I don't imagine Peter being homeless at all and that sign...well I'm not usually up for those kinds of things in fic, I mean him being like that. (although it's pretty much canon that he would do sth ike that) The plot was simple which I liked, Tris can't help but help people. It always really bothered me in books that she would still show some kindness to anyone but Peter. Anyways..what really sold me was the smut. You're extremely talented! I think a lot of people agree on that Peter was crushing on Tris, I don't see any other way, so good job!

Thank you for this.

This is the kind of content I come to this site for, honestly.

How this doesn't have hundreds of reviews is beyond me. The smut was perfect because you kept Tris and Peters voices so perfect. The integrity of them is there. Brilliant. One of my absolute favorites!

This was really good. Great job! I think many you should continue this story and try to get some story going between them
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! Not enough wows to describe this masterpiece! I'm absolutely in love with this oneshot! Oh please you have to continue this story, at least give us a second part! And of course please write more stories about these two! Fucking brilliant, so beautiful!

Sequel soon, please! It's the best fic of this couple I've read in years! Sequel soon, please! :D

Okay - can I just say, this is hands down the /best/ Petris fic I've ever read. Characterization is perfect, the writing is perfect, the smut is perfect - this fic inspired me to write a Petris fic of my own. Well done. :)

Very heartwarming and a good twist a little bit too aggressive for me though but it is peter so nice job

This was fantastic. I love to see a good PeterTris. Amazing job.

I love it! One of the best Divergent stories I have read!

Well hot damn, I'm just going to pretend this is the end of Allegiant instead of the actual one. I really do think Tobias dying would be a much more natural progression of events than Tris dying...but maybe that's just my Petris-loving self speaking, as well as the fact that I'm just more attached to Tris than to Tobias because we've had her point of view longer. It would certainly be a cruel move of Veronica Roth's to kill Tobias off, but not AS cruel as killing Tris, at least!
But back to your incredible story! Like someone else said on the reviews, Petris is an extremely hard pairing to write well. Honestly, you have no idea how hard it is being a hardcore Petris shipper and having to shuffle through about 50 bad Petris fanfics per every one that manages to capture the essence of how they would ACTUALLY be as a couple. But dude, you NAILED it. You nailed it so hard it's going to be stuck on the metaphorical wooden wall forever. Both Peter and Tris were completely in-character, and I also saw both of their characters develop, and Peter I saw develop more than he did throughout the entirety of Allegiant. Having both of them grow while not changing either of their core personalities is quite a feat, especially over the course of such a short fanfic.
And damn, the angst. I LOVE the angst. That's what made me fall in love with the shipping in the first place, and I think it suits it much better than forced fluff. "Two broken halves of the same glass, fitting into each other's jagged edges" holy crap, I love that line. And his explanation of why he kinda fell in love with her while being insanely jealous of her during initiation makes SO much sense! Helps justify a pairing that even I wonder why I ship sometimes XD
I'll admit, I got really uncomfortable reading the sex scene. Because like initiate Tris, I'm terrified of intimacy XD But damn, it was so natural that I don't think the story could've worked without it. But I think my favorite part was when Tris was complaining about the statue and Peter offers to help her knock it down X3 It just makes me squee so hard when I'm reading Petris fanfictions and he shows affection to her in these indirect ways that are kinda sweet, but not out-of-character.
So thank you, THANK YOU for doing justice to my Divergent OTP. If you ever wrote any sort of sequel to this, I would read it in a heartbeat. Keep up the good work, in any case!