Reviews for But I Want Something Else
AceSpaders chapter 1 . 8/17/2019
moreee plsss aaaa kakak plis
GreenDrkness chapter 6 . 12/13/2016
This was a nice read and just what I wanted some down right pwp love the fluffy parts as well as the hard and dirty parts
Maybe write one of the siblings catching the lovebirds doing something kinky that would be funny
Keep on the writes
Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2016
"You can't deny that you didn't like it" is a double negative meaning that he really didn't like it. It should be "You can't deny that you liked it".
ShitCook chapter 6 . 3/11/2016
I loved these! If you're still writing any, I'm not sure if you do prompts, so it's okay if you don't. But maybe one they switch? For Ace's birthday, maybe?
poemado chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
That was really nice written like all your stories. Love Marco x ace smut
Yuki Artsa chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
Omnomnom... I enjoyed that too ēwē
Fushicho92 chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
Really good~~! I loved the start where Marco was between Ace's legs mmm that was really nice. There is nothing like teasing Marco B Yet another awesomely written oneshot *hearts*
Blue.soilder.4710 chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
What a nice surprise, great job with the smut!~
Fushicho chapter 5 . 11/1/2015
Wonderful as always~! On my phone so just made up a quick name. I loved itt~~ Thank you so much for uploading it sweetheart uvu
VanessaOlivas chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
10/10 SEND TO OBAMA THIS NEEDS TO BE PUBLISHED IN LIFE MAGAZINE U R GOD
Yuki Artsa chapter 4 . 4/9/2015
Me/Aiko: -screaming, nosebleed-
Utsubyo: -writes- There are two species of women. There are the freelance, non-homophobic ones...
Shiro: -radiating murderous aura even heavier than usual-
Utsubyo: -writes- ... And the ones that must have a palm tree stuck in their ass because they're so uptight, those who don't accept homosexuals or just homophobic altogether.
Shiro: -death glare at Utsubyo-
Yuki Artsa chapter 3 . 4/9/2015
Aiko: I wonder if Shiro-sama is the type to tease —
Shiro: -shoves Utsubyo in her mouth- TALKINGABOUTMYSEXLIFEINACOMMENTISNTAGREATIDEAYOUBASTARD.
Me: -snickers- I know how she likes it
Aiko: *w* -kneels- TEACH ME, SENSEI! TELL ME HOW TO PLEASURE MY DEAR SHIRO-SAMA!
Utsubyo: -grabs remote, mutes conversation for children, walks off drying self-
Yuki Artsa chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
Me: I can't help but think of this as a mashup-AU of One Piece and Love Stage, but I love the idea 3
Aiko: -nosebleeeeeeeedeh-
Utsubyo: -writes- I just cleaned that TT
Shiro: -raises eyebrow-
Me: -points to junk that isn't Utsubyo's, moved to corner- Der.
StarPurpleandBlue chapter 4 . 2/22/2015
I got a bit confused. This smut is tied to the Valentine's Day chapter? If so, this happens before the picnic or after? Because I don't think anything about the picnic was commented about here, so if it was before, I'm sure Ace would have said or thought about it... But well, at least in this version Marco received a good gift and Ace too in a way XD Your descriptions are improving btw! On to another chapter now
general yumi chapter 4 . 2/14/2015
Kyaa this is awesome! I love when one of them is jealous.
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