This whole piece is amazing! So grateful that you stuck it out and finished it without the story feeling incomplete. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end and hope that you continue writing as long as you enjoy it. Thank you again.

hi dere!read thrgh all d chaptr..wonderfully made.:).it gves me anthr outlook,perspectve u may call it on anthr life of d verbal-fight bwtn ardeth n sharp-witted alex..i really love d way u xpress dere thght n all those romantc poem(i thnk its poem)..4gve me for my ignornt..nywy..good job!;)

ps:i actually hve to look up 4 d words dat got me mind boggled..hehe..

Beautiful, simply beautiful. It's not some sloppy story where a mysterious girl joins Rick and Evie on a trip to Hamunaptra and immediately Ardeth and her fall for each other. This story actually has a spine and makes sense. Great job! Thank you for taking the time to write something this good, it was a pleasure to read it!

-nesraLymA

This is an amazing fic~ Enheduana/Alexandra blossoms throughout the story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :) I only wish it didn't have to end, haha. -

*applauds and cheers feverishly*

Think of me as an opposite of the professional grievers ;)

That was beautifully done, mixing past and present, quotes and emotions, fact and fiction!

This is about the third time I have read your story since May of 2008 I believe, and I now realize that I have not even been gracious enough to review it!

If you could not tell by now, I absolutely LOVE what you have written here. It made me laugh, cry and crave more to read of it.

I have been extremely hard pressed to find another story that captures my interest as yours has, and my only complaint is that there was not more to read!

This is just beautifully written and very poignant. I'm not sure yet if I have read this and reviewed years ago but is definately worth a 2nd read and review. Looking forward to all the other chapters.

Man what a beautifully bittersweet story. Definitely the most well written "past life" fic I've seen yet..

And since I noticed you worried about this in the author notes- I definitely think you did a great job at creating a believable ficverse.. cuz let's be honest- very very very FEW of your readers are going to have a clear view of Egyptian history beyond the movie lol What you did well, was that you kept the details you created consistent with each other and throughout the story.

It's definitely hard to do but you did it well!

Very nicely done! Very! The plot was well thought out and the quotes! well...I enjoyed those the most but that's because im an odd duck.

anywho- nicely done!

More from you I hope!

You're a modern day Scheherzade! :) It's obvious that enormous consideration and attention was bestowed on this bittersweet, engaging story. The characters are wonderfully fleshed out (Eve & Rick provided a nice comic counter to the seeming bleakness of the pairing between Alex & Ardeth), the progression of the story coherent and the language poetic without being too embellished.

*sigh* It was a great read, so don't stop writing!

Hey, I just wanted to drop by and say that this was a really great story. Excellent, intelligent and wonderfully done. The title always caught me, so it was nice to see you explain it at the end. :) I hope to see more from you! Excellent work!

*racing to catch up still* Excellent, excellent so far. :) Sweeping storyline and impressive maturity. I'm highly enjoying this.

Oy, mixed mixed emotions. I'm so glad you updated and I was able to read the conclusion to this fantastic story. Yet I'm sad, for not being able to read more about the growing relationship between Ardeth and Alex.

Well done; the mixture of different times in history, the use of Arabic, the knowledge you exhibited especially with the poison.I could go on and on.

You say this was your first Mummy fanfic, eh? Well the highest compliment I could pay could have fooled me. If you ever get the time, please write more. ;-)

Hey all,

Thanks so much for your cajoling and comments, every single one of you - 're very nearly done, and yes, there will be an epilogue ;0)

Very, very nice. Quite! :) You are remarkable in your story telling and I'm glad I delved into this. I'll have to continue tomorrow when it isn't so late, bnut I surely look forward to it! :) Great work!