Very nice.

How interesting! At the same time you affirmed the unicorns' existence by saying they don't die, you denied the existence of all those other places that were supposed to be the same as where unicorns die.

This flows beautifully. Well done.

I really like this poem. It's evocative and, best of all, it rhymes! I haven't read "The Last Unicorn" so I don't really have anything to compare this to, but I can honestly say I liked and felt it was well-written.

Beautiful! So pretty!

That was absolutely amazing! You're my hero. Seriously. That was awesome.

Love your rhyme scheme there... Nice indeed...

-Red

Woderfuly written. Excellent poem.
Hevenly_Fox_Maiden

That was very well written! You have a very poetic styel (I know, writing poetry, that may seem a given, but believe me, most fan fiction poetry is not at all poetic!). I loved the repeated question of where the unicorns die, and how you applied that to all those imaginary beings and places. Awesome work!

I love the way your rhyme flows. It doesn't sound forced. I am in awe of you, because I've never been able to accomplish a good rhyme.

I don't know what to say. Bravo! Very good!

This is beautiful. I love your mastery of lyrical phrases! What does the Latin(?) phrase mean at the end? I love your name, might I add. Write more!

This was beautiful. I'm at a loss of words... wow... you're going on my favs list. need i say more?

much luv

zauber_witch

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Magical. Your mastery over lyrical composure is astounding. Your peice is a jewel in a sea of crystal ornaments. Cheers to you my friend. You are an inspiration.

Absolutely beautiful. The last set of lines is really gorgeous, with the 'ity' sounds at the end. Nice cadence to the whole poem.