Damn! Just... wow

Oh my god I'm going to cry!

I've read this sooooo any times and I still can't stop crying at it! It's sooooo powerful and heartbreaking! I know just how Scott feels, to have a member of your family die and leave you behind. But he did the right thing in moving forward and making progress, rather than looking back and halting all together. We should take a leaf out of Scott's book and carry on. Be sad and morn, but continue life as it should be. Thanks for the amazing poem- you really inspired my style of poetry!

Poor Scott, what ever went wrong?

It's hard to describe exactly how this makes me feel, but WOW that was powerful! You've done a fantastic job at getting Scott's emotions and messed up thoughts across; it's wonderful in a tragic way. I can't begin to imagine how something like that would make someone feel, but I think you've shown this through Scott's mind incredibly well - especially the determination to carry on protecting his brothers :) xxx

This was really good xx

Nooooo not virgil :O cant believe you're leaving :( thank u for your amazing stories