This was very well done, thanks to this I can rest in Peace.

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Nice job! That was really well done.

Damn it.. It's so good

I just walked around my house with my arms in the air screaming, "YASSSS!". My mom told me to shut up. Lol.

It might be only an American convention, but most buildings skip the 13th floor jumping from 12 to14.

Hehe that was pretty cute. A fun scenario, a brilliant idea for a sequel, and well thought out given their respective talents. Gotta feel bad for Rumi though, getting into trouble as an adult because of Seki. They do make a great team though, glad they'll get to spend even more time together.

Omg! finally! A story that actually involves them kissing! I love it!

Awwwww, I can't handle this much cuteness! XD 3 XD 3

I love this! AMAZING!

The story is so touching. I like the way you told it. Like, when they grew up, I guess. It's so good, good job! I would like more of this!

I ly it, mann!
No, but seriously, I do.
As a fanfic writer myself. I ship them and wanted to see this come true.
Yas! But what's with writing Indian Style? Lol! Cross legged would be a better description.

It's be awesome if you can shorten the paragraphs in the paper clip section. It's really hard to read. Otherwise it's a good story.

I want to find you and give you a hug! This was so much fun to read. Thank you for taking the time to write it up and post it. _