Awww, love James

SPOILER ALERT FOR THOSE WHO HAVEN'T ACTUALLY READ IT ALL YET!

This is an amazing fic. The friendship between the Marauders has the right amount of tension at the Shape incident, the right amount of worry at secrets being revealed, and the right amount of comfort when a crisis happens. The individual characters are also brilliant - I've mentioned how much I love Pete's POV when he's pulling away, and James and Lily's characters are a perfect pair. Sirius is just as he should be - insecure about his family but a strong friend. Remus and him are really sweet together, and you introduced their relationship quite slowly, which worked really well. I especially loved Petunia's wedding, Remus' mum's death, the reactions to Chloe's death, the character of McGonagall, and pretty much everything. I loved everything. Really, really good job. :)

I really like the writing from Peter's POV - it hints at him growing apart quite subtly, how he feels left out and all that.

Regulus is written really well here.

The emotion from Remus was perfect - it seemed numb and fuzzy and sterile and just beautifully real. The letter at the end was a brilliant finish, and ... I can't even say what else was good. This whole chapter was perfect. :-)

I love the gentle, teasing friendship of Lily and Sirius here. They're so well written as characters and as a pair.

james potter was a seeker not a chaser

I know you wrote this years ago, but I just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying it. I love the budding friendship between Lily and Moony.

not forever ! the fish is going to disappear when you die

That was SO WONDERFUL. All the feels.

OMG. BEST CHAPTER. LILY AND JAMES. OMFG. THE FEELS. SO FUNNY. I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. ARGH.

I liked the story up until now but i feel like this is a little bit too much for the T rating. It's jsut that I love the Mauraders and I can even handle the freqent mentions of alcohol but this is just a little too much.

Okay so I finished reading this maybe a week or two ago but I only just now found my account password so I could add this as a favorite and leave you a comment, haha. This story was AMAZING! 3 It was so well written and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I definitely recommended it to my best friend, and I can't wait to read the sequel too! :D

Okay, chapter 27 is the most emotional chapter I have read, and it was really sad and I am struggling through so many feels right now. I love the way you have shown Remus bonding with his dad a bit more, and the grief was so well written. This was a beautifully sad chapter, but well done!

I just started this story and it is really good so far! I'm really excited to see where this goes and you are clearly a great writer!