| Reviews for Brother, Interrupted |
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Miko Eiko chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 Al menos recordará en unos meses, eso me alivia, no hay peor pesadilla para un hermano mayor que su hermano menor sea lastimado de alguna forma. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2017 You could have made this in a story with many chapters I mean I was a little lost on what was going on |
Kas3y chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 Sweet lil story :) |
StrawberrySpice chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 omg my heart T-T 3 3 |
Kneazle-Chan chapter 1 . 4/23/2017 Fantastic writing as usual. It's simplistic language with complex emotions. This scene is so good, but I can help wanting it to be longer. Or more specifically, I want to know what happened to Mikey. Something about a research facility, so experimenting most likely. Leo, Don, Raph, and Mikey are all in-character and their interactions flow smoothly. Favorite Lines: "We're going to burn them to the ground." (and) "We'll find you, Mikey. We'll look forever." "Donatello and Raphael only nodded without missing a beat." This sentence feels a little awkward. If you delete "only" or "without missing a beat," it'd be smoother. But nice fic overall! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2016 I am an avid reader of all of your tmnt works, and I adore every one, however, this one always pulls at my heartstrings. The writing is so simplistic and complex at the same time. The emotions raw and pure. By far one of the best fics on the entire site in any category. Thank-you for your writing, it brings these characters to life allowing us to share in both their joys and their grief. If ever you chose to write a prequel fic to this, I'm sure it would be just as amazing. Kieri-Norou |
BrightLotusMoon chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 BABY. Tormented Mikey, lost and found Mikey, slowly healing Mikey, MY Mikey. |
Demi4yah chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 I absolutely loved this. An amnesia fic without being completely cliche. It was short and sweet. The ending was perfect. |
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 1 . 2/13/2016 This is a good fic too! Glad that Mikey is getting his memories back though, whew. Good job! |
AlessandraDC chapter 1 . 1/24/2016 Nicely done! Love the interaction between Leo and Mikey. |
SakuBloss chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 Oh my gosh...*tries to keep the tears from falling*...just heartbreakingly beautiful. You got me...right in the feels ;-; |
LiL PriNCeSs Me chapter 1 . 1/28/2015 Awwwwww. Just, awwwww. So sweet, so cute. And Leo was pretty awesome. "We're going to burn them to the ground." Just great. I love how you can sum up everything in just a short story, and I mean everything. |
Firebird Scratches chapter 1 . 1/9/2015 Beautiful! And I love Leo's matter-of-fact, "We're burning them to the ground." You don't tug on Superman's cape, and you don't mess with Leo's little brothers. |
Magpiebee chapter 1 . 12/25/2014 Love the emotion and flow of this oneshot. Great work! |
Michael J Angelo chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 Firstly, kudos on summing up a popular trope in turtles fanfiction in a single one shot with just as much feeling. Granted it felt a teeny bit rushed, but Mikey's ending comment and Leo's answer made me too happy to care. Secondly, great work. :') |