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Its very hard to find goku vegetation fics especially ones of such quality so the for this your the best

Ta Ta For Now. That's what it stands for, right?

Fantastic story! Keep it up!

Oh ma lawd that was amazing. You sent shivers down my spine. 11/10

This was great! I loved how detailed the naughty bits were ;) I don't know if you want some constructive criticism, but there were a few spelling errors, nothing big. All in all, written very well!

O_O NOSEBLEED

Wow that was amazing

This was great. Honestly I liked it a lot. Kind of wish it had been a story. *wink wink nudge nudge*

Please write an after story I loved this one PLEEEEASE

O - O That was amazing.I should show your work to my RP friends on google(w/ credit).Most especially Goku and would freak.

very nice

Fucking amazing. Loved it. Can't wait to see what else you'll write

This fanfic was great you worded perfect and was great

A yummy oneshot.