AH!

How could you stop it there, and never finish the story, or say whether Brennan died or not?

Hello, I just red your story and it's AMAZING, WONDERFULL and FANTASTIC but not yet finished! NO, you must be kidding, this is no end, it's a cliffhanger!

I red your story with sweaty palms, pounding heart, knot in my stomach, full of excitement, I just couldn't stop, had to finish it!

You really got me fixed on it, it's totally breathcatching, it's THRILLING, ANGST filling, with lots of TORTURE, (especially of Brennan, my favourite, love it!) and there is ACTION from beginning till end, really FANTASTIC!

I love the way you describe Brennan in your story, a tough guy who is really vulnerable, (just how I like him!) joking, cocky, caring, protective and always thinking about his Teammates, never about himself! (WAUW!..what a guy!)

And you really know how to pump up the excitement in your story it didn't stop, it just got better and better WOW..WOW! (Keep it coming!)

But what is going to happen now, is he going to die, NO, you can't mean that, there has to be an happy end, so come on and write an other chapter or two or three, PLEASE, you can't leave this story hanging on like this, I have to know what is going to happen to Brennan, sob..sob..he's not going to die is he, so PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE!

I did look at your Personal Profile and noticed you didn't write anything in two years! So you will probably not even read my review, but I write it anyway!

You know I am getting really irritated to read stories who have NO END!

There are so many writers who abandon their really GOOD and most FANTASTIC stories, it's just so FU..ING S..T! (sorry for the language!)

WHY? Who can answer me that! WHY?

When it's a writersblock, just ask some help, there must be Reviewers who can help!

Maybe you lost interest in writing, well that's a thousand pities, you really have potential! Or your to busy doing other things, well than make time for writing an decent END to this story!

I will be for ever thankfull and take back every bad thing I sad (and thought!) about you!

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE AN END TO THIS STORY!

You are going to write another chapter right? I have enjoyed reading this story that you had written. It was very intresting and full of action. My type of story. You can't let Brannon die though.

IS that yet is the story finished?

Brennan is going to be ok, isn't he? Hurry and write some more.

Excellent story. Still so much potential..so pleeeeeze don't let Brennan die.

Uh uh. No. I won't believe that he is dead! He can't be dead, can he? Please continue!

No. Not after everything that has happened. No...I hope you update soon.

cool!

This is really good. I'm only up to chapter 4 and will read a few more chapters next time I get computer time. WHoah! nice work.

Love this story! I'm anxious to find out what Thorne has in store for Brennan, he can probably tell that he is getting weaker. Keep going!

Another great chapter! Good and to the point. It's good how you mentioned Brennan's injuries, I mean he is tough, but not that tough. :-) I'm hoping Shalimar and Jesse don't leave them and I am interested to see what Thorne's next move will be. Keep it up.

Sparky.

Glad to see Thorne hasdn't changed his thoughts on Brennan. Just a quick question, couldn't Emma pick up Thorne's emotions towards Brennan? Anyway, love the story, keep it up!

enjoyed this chap...but one question...is this e/b or s/b?