I care, I know it’s heen years but any loss is horrible and I can’t even imagine the loss of a twin to something as horrible and unfair as cancer. So I care and I’m sorry for your loss. And even though it’s been years my thoughts are with you.

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this, but the spell is not "disarm" it's Expelliarmus. Usually, I overlook such things, especially in older stories but this isn't old enough to qualify. The idea is interesting and I appreciate the nods to canon.

Not sure you will see this review but know that I anf many others will always be here to talk to and I know you posted this quite a while ago but sometimes people want to talk a long time after

the Story is quite nice however i found your choise of verbal tenses a bit out...

Never say people won’t care what about what you say or what has happened to you. No matter what, people will always care, I care. I hope his funeral went well and you and your family are well.

Ps. I love your stories sooo much and love the way they merge with the actual timeline of the Harry Potter movies. Please keep writing.

i think hermione is a bit ridiculous...

Chapter 22 the best one.

You are so strong and so inspiring. Thank you for writing this and I really hope you are doing okay now. It is a little late but better now then never right? :)

This story has so much potential but the grammar and sentence structure needs some major work. Maybe slow the story down a bit? I feel like you're racing through the story to get to the good parts. Overall, I like your plot line, keep up the good work.

I'm so sorry to hear about your brother, I can'5 even imagine. I loved this story and I hope you continue writing.

That was absolutely the most amazing dramione fanfic I have read! I loved it sooooo much.

I love the ending conversation between Harry and Draco! That was a good thing to put in there!

Beautiful ending!

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