Loved it! Thanks!

I loved it, thank you! I generally don't like NCIS, but your story is a wonderful idea! As a family, not really an investigation, it was fantastic! Gibs is an exceptional father! severe if necessary, but always fair! He will of course remain the father, even when the children grow up!
thank you very much!, fortunately there is more! I will read it quickly!

5th time rereading this series, still one of my top 3 favorites on this site.

I cried in this chapter! Great job and I cannot wait to finish this xxoo

When I first started reading this story, I didn't know if Inwould like it...it did start rather strangely. But after reading it I think it is one of the best little Tony and Ziva stories that I have read and eagerly look forward to reading more in the series. Thank you!

Parts of this chapter had me laughing so hard that tears came

I take it that children's paracetamol is similar to children's tylenol that is used in the USA? Great story

Tony finally crying out he has held in since he was a kid...and Gibbs loves him...

The kids have now been given a chance at a better childhood then they did with their fathers...now they can experience the love of a Dad.

Gibbs might be easier to deal with now that he has two little ones to look after...

A bit of humor in this one...by the time the kids grow up Gibbs is hoong to be bald from pulling out his hair. I like this story...

3:09am fuck

I think I had to hold my breathe to stop from squeling more times in the past hour than I have in my entire life

Update: it is now 2:44am and I only took one bathroom break and one chapstick break

Update: It is 1:38 am and I'm not getting any sleep until I finish this