Wow this story was amazing! I'm not sure if you will ever start another story but I'd love to read your writing in an Elladan or Elrohir story.

OK so I decided to read again the Lothiriel/Eomer fanfics of and I realized I have never read this one before O.o and I absolutely loved it !
Who knows, maybe you will write a sequel ?

A good story. I admit sometimes Lothiriel's behavior got in my nerves and made some foolish decisions but she had an adventure like no other. I liked her friendship with Eowyn with whom shared those adventures, at Helm's deep and the fight in Pelennor. Eomer made a very stupid mistake and being stubborn led to the heartbreaking of Lothiriel's heart and his own. I can't blame her brothers who wanted to make him pay. Her talk with her father after her depression was very good. The happy ending was so nice.

Sorry, best archer in Dol Amroth? Might find a husband. Should be on the front lines? Dol Amroth is warning Rohan about orcs? Too middle school.

SWEET ELBRETH! THIS IS AWESOME, FANTASTIC AND...AND...(all the praising words). By the valar this story made me cry in happiness and sadness, laugh like a madwoman and riled me up. I've never read a story as such. You portrayed all incidents and emotions in a very powerful way that it felt like I was experiencing the story. You portrayed Lothiriel just the way I hoped for! Independent, strong, witty, hot headed and making her an expert in archery. But don't you think their are some unfinished tales to be told? Please write a sequel! We would be impatient and hopeful for a sequel!

I understand that her father might be hurt by her actions. But he is alo dramatiing the situation, at leastin my eyes.
"playing hero"... he really doesn't understand. It wasn't gory she seeked by coming to the battlefield. In his remarks he is so sexist.
If I were her i would be enraged. He is supposed to be wise, this certainly doesn't prove it. I find his words harsh and immature.

I don't quite understand why people in this story keep stressing that Éomer is below Lothíriel - she may be a princess, but he's the king's nephew - and with Theodred dead, heir to the throne. That would actually place him above her in status.

Wonderful story! :) Thank you! Hope you write more stories!

I just read this in a total of two days and it has been an wonder to say the least! It is not often that I review a story on fanfiction and even less often that I review that has been finished for so long but after finishing this one I had no other choice. Great praise needs to go to the author for this is truly one of the best stories I have read on this site. Well done!

Okie now I'm cryingg T_T

Huhu this is the best version Lothiriel I've ever read in the entire fanfiction universe! T_T huhuhu I love you for writing her. Thank you. Huhuhu

Arghh I'm supposed to be sleeping by now :)) But your story is ahhh just to good! I can't stop myself from reading more! Thank you so much!

I finished reading Transcendence (or what have been posted of it) a few days ago and had to see if you had written anything else, because I absolutely admire your writing. I was so happy to find this story! I am at no means any kind of expert in Tolkien so you could probably have spun me a long tale, called it canon and I wouldn't have known. And all of this (even the made up characters) truly seemed like something from the Tolkien Universe.

As you mentioned yourself, I am not a big fan of Eowyn either so I was very happy with how you wrote her and pleasantly surprised to suddenly like her:)
The way you write feelings (both angst and the romantic bits) is amazing. I could almost feel the characters' feelings;) I cannot imagine how this story could get any hate (I really, really hate those guests too sometimes).

I hope that you update Transcendence soon, because that is brilliant as well. Definitely the best Legolas fic I have read so far.

But thanks for this wonderful story and best of luck in the future.

Love it :) xXx

Oh I absolutley loved this story and don't regret a single minute that I've spend reading it ! Thank you so much for this amazing work of art and to many more storys to come ! CBC