I love the old man and brat spats~! Love! Awe, Ace wasn't heartless to his old man! Just being invisible ink! So sweet! This was very pleasing to read~! Thank you for sharing! *swoons*

That was brilliant. Your writing is amazing, it was really interesting. I love it alot, like wow.

-HIGH FIVE!-

I was going to leave it at that but I wanted to share some thoughts.., I predicted it to be a double prank.., there's this thing called 'Acme disappearing and reappearing ink' the ink fades away then after an indefinite period of time, it reappears.., so after their little romp in the hot springs, he'd find all the reports ready to be filed on his desk.., but the whole National Treasure thing was cool.., why do I always find movie and tv references in your fics? I need to lay of the cinema..,

What I was really looking forward to while reading this kept changing with every new twist, but come the second to last stage I had fully hoped for Marco to leave the butt plug in Ace, prop him up against the rock face and ride him.., the toy stabbing deep into him as he bounced ferociously, impaling himself on his weak and drained lover.., drooooools like all over the place grabs mop I thought maybe a little generosity would have been nice but it seems it wasn't required by Ace's standards..,

what pleases me the most is that this is like the much wanted sequel to your fire oneshot.., if this element theme is something you wish to stick with may a make a few suggestions via devil fruit names? Hie hie no mi, goro goro no mi, doru doru no mi.., I am both proud and embarrassed that I knew those by heart, if you don't remember which those are go hit up the opwikia.., I think all 3 of them are pretty generic and maybe not as clever as they could be but yeah.., doru is paramecia but I don't care.., at least I didn't say awa awa no mi.., thats both kinky and painful.., personally, I prefer awa fluffy over smutty

First and, so far, only porn in the event :D It was good, interesting I'm glad you participated in the event with this :D

That was hot. I'm just stating the obvious.
I do wonder if this wouldn't simply encourage Ace to ruin Marco's work more instead of less. XD
Thanks for the fic!

Very hot... Besides the smut, which was excellent, I really loved the part where Ace gets all insecure that Marco doesn't like his present, and Marco rushes to tell him he does. Thanks for such a great story

is there another chappter

Mmmmm, finally some real scenery porn! Seriously, this delightful bit of smut was intense, it was so vivid and the descriptions were so well done, I am in complete awe over how wonderful this story is. What gets me the most however, is how strong we can tell the bond between Marco and Ace is from just reading about the incredible sex they have. Any lover would have the right to call several of Marco's actions into question, but Ace trusted him so thoroughly that aside from begging for more, he didn't question anything. I also really liked how Marco gave Ace a safe action so things wouldn't go too far. It was beautiful, and I find the MAce relationship to be truly precious. You did such an amazing job with this story. Thank you for sharing!

So hot! I love dirty-talking Marco ;)

If Marco just had let him finish (talking, that is XD). But I suppose we wouldn't have had such an interesing story :$

This was super hot! Great work :D

Ahaha Ace didn't get a chance to explain until afterwards. Still, he deserves it for stressing Marco out. Damn tho, that was hot! I love how into it Ace is, and how Marco pushes him until he begs. More than once! So nice. Also that setting sounded great, where can I find my own heated waterfall (and pirate commander)?