I’m not for sure when you took down this chapter, I hope you’ll put it again soon. Whether you upload it up again here or upload it on Archive of Our Own, i can’t wait read it!

aww that's so romantic

Cute.

Fellow Author,

If Eliminator hasn't gotten it through to you, then I guess I will:

Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. "Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA."
Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference.

Unless you want to get banned by a Fanfiction Admin once they see this, I would suggest you remove the parts of them getting it on. You don't need explicit content to make your story good, you can always suggest to it. A story does not need MA to be good, that and it goes against the rules. You are not invincible to Fanfiction, just know that. They will see this.

I am not going to report you, since Eliminator is already on it. But please, know I am not trying to be a bully, I am trying you help you. If you really want to keep this story, you need to understand that MA content is not allowed on this site. Publish it on Adult or somewhere else where this kind of stuff IS allowed.

Don't make this any harder than it has to be, fellow author. You are a very good writer, and I can see that. Don't let this little thing end your story.

-Tigerboy101

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Please remove all detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature from this story if you want it on this site. Try to upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own.

o that story and ending was awesome! I loved the entire thing and will definitely make sure to follow you! ;) please write more stories about Lianna and Rocket soon! I love them!

Love the story and if you plan on more Lianna and Rocket story

The suspense tho

I am definitely not crying! Nope, I am not drowning in my own tears right now because of the thought of this amazing story coming to an end. (Saying all that through my tear filled eyes) I am so sad to see this story end and this was another great chapter! Excited for the last one and I bet it'll be great!

Lianna lives, and the doctors found out and told everyone that she is pregnant with Rocket's baby. Ultimate twist.

NOOOO! Lianna! Wha...how...why! How could you kill her! Hopefully she isn't really dead but I am still extremely sad now. D,X please update again. I need to know if she lives!

OH. MY. GOSH

OH. SNAP.

This is a good chapter and i really enjoyed it even though i already knew what was going to happen and what /is/ going to happen :) Ps 'TO EVERYONE ELSE' As said in the previous chapter it will finish at chapter 20-ish so keep checking for updates. This is still NOT THE END! :)

0o0 omg! Stein found them! Please update again. The story is amazing and I just want to keep reading more! I need to know what will happen to Lianna and the rest of the gang. And bad Rocket! Why would he say something like that to her! It's his fault they crashed the ship! Oh well. Just update again. The suspense is killing me. :)