| Reviews for More Than Meets The Eye |
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   Mike The Polish Guy chapter 5 . 6/30 wait ...marvel universe or are you just using a character? |
| SentinelBlaster chapter 9 . 6/10 I love what you have done so far. Can't wait to see what you do next. |
| Aurora Wave-Prime-Tron chapter 9 . 3/31 please continue! |
| PyroPlayer243 chapter 9 . 12/9/2019 Please continue |
| NightshotShadowFury chapter 9 . 9/1/2019 ARE YOU STILL ALIVE!? PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/14/2019 Some of the pretending seems OK, but you have Jack pretend too much at points. It seems so you can basically stick to the script and keep the dialog the same. Change the script. As long as you can get into the character minds so you can make them feel right, you don't have to copy the show so much. |
| The Shadow Monarch chapter 4 . 10/5/2018 ...Yo this story hs the same speed of light. You aren't even going into details or backgrounds. You're just skipping over everything. |
| Mat Pullen chapter 9 . 6/25/2018 I love this story, I hope that you continue with it! |
| NightmarePhoenix chapter 9 . 2/6/2018 Enjoy the story when are you going to finish it if you planned to finish it? |
| Captain James H00K chapter 9 . 12/1/2017 Nice story so far. I do hope you update this soon. Life can get in the way sometimes and trying to find time is hard. Happy writing! |
| edboy4926 chapter 9 . 5/15/2017 Good story Keep on going |
| Road warrior chapter 1 . 4/9/2017 The whole of what happened in Egypt took place two years after the first movie so he should have been having those dreams for years now. |
| levi.hall.9279 chapter 9 . 3/31/2017 Excellent chapter didn't get the reference till you explained. Do hope you continue with this story |
| Mahkatadi chapter 3 . 3/23/2017 Seriously... what's the point of giving someone a different point of view, personality, and life experience if you're just going to lazily rehash canon. This is what we call in the writing business "lazy". |
| Mahkatadi chapter 3 . 3/23/2017 In harm's way and danger is present, would rather hide secret because rewriting canon is easier. Are you joking me? |
