Yaaaay - good for Harry and Ginny - for going against all expectations!

great job

This was pretty sweet, but I think my favorite part has to be the way in which you had Ginny and Harry interacting. They were so in character, and you managed to capture their relationship so well.

Okay so this was pretty sweet, and you used all of the prompts I handed out, I believe :) The prompts were either/or but you used them both, plus the prompts, well done!

The story itself was nice, and I like how Ginny and Harry interacted. They're both happy to see the other, but still Ginny can still detect his sadness. You might want to take a look at the end of the second paragraph, you have what looks like a fragmented sentence. I don't know If that's supposed to be there.

You're spelling and grammar was fine, and I really liked this story! I don't know If I'm supposed to tell you this or not, but I awarded you house points :) Overall, nice job!