Beautiful, simply beautiful

So good

I like the way you write, is good. And I liked the chapter, how you did it, how you pictured them, it felt like them, so I wouldnt change a thing. And I would love to read more from them by you.

huweeee this is awesome! I really like that " Where they forget how temporary time is." part XD its so cute! I love it!

Oh god, reading this after what happened in the last episode makes it worse. This was lovely though, very well-organized and beautifully written. I need more twelve x lisa in my life and I got it from you! Thank you for writing this!

Wow, I'm way late in reading this considering the anime now has 9 episodes already, but I still enjoyed this! Very well written and lovely oneshot, I liked reading about their interactions and Twelve's thoughts about Lisa. x)

This is the fic that got me shipping hisalisa, thank you, I loved the innocence you caught of these two

Beautifully written. No really it's a masterpiece! I loved this the purity, the depth... It's all there. Truly beautiful, in the anime it's already quite obvious twelve has some type of feeling for Lisa, it may not be love just yet but there is caring. I love how you too that complex and made it so much more especially the writing in the italics, very well placed. Ahh I want more! Please write more :')

cute X3

omg your fanfic is pretty similar to the new episode. especially how Lisa cooks and the smoke part.

Loved this, and I am really looking forward to episode 5, although I could not find the previews for it so I am not sure what you were referring to in your author's note... I hope you write more Zankyou no Terror fics :) :) :) :)

This was wonderful to read! I'm really sad because of the lack of Terror in Tokyo fanfiction, even though it's new, but this fic made me very happy. And I ship those two so much! The characters were portrayed perfectly, and I loved every bit of it! Please write more in the furture! :D
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