Big trouble afoot! Glad you started posting again. :)

Good work on featuring Lion-O, Tygra, and Panthro this chapter. They come across as characters really well. The current situation plaguing them and the others will no doubt prepare them all for whatever else may come next. And I look forward to how this entire story will keep playing out.

A DNA mutation and a possible link the to the ThunderCats. Very interesting! Glad to see you writing again!

I'm pretty happy I got to read the latest chapter of "Lost in Limbo" here.

This installment definitely stuck with me. Superb characterizations all around.

Panthro is going to cause trouble or perhaps fix it? Not sure but I am liking this! Well done hun! :)

This Brya guy is not a good guy. I'd like to see the panther put him in his place. So glad to see you writing again. :)

What a truly gripping chapter you've written here, my friend. I enjoyed reading it.

Excellent chapter right here, my friend. You perfectly captured Panthro and Leanna's characters.

Dropping you a review. ;) Well done sweetie. Can't wait for more.

Love it look forward to reading more when you post it

Oh big trouble. I hope they find Panthro before Brya does. Glad to see this updated! :)

Great chapter here, Leanna. I liked it a whole lot. The tension is high among everybody, and you do a good job of illustrating it. If you're still reading "Punks of Thunder," please check out my latest chapter. :)

It's really good I look forward to reading the next chapter

So, this is a good start, but there are a lot of things that bugged me. You have a lot of run on sentences. In the first sentence of the first paragraph, you should either put a semi colon (one of these ;) between ‘sky’ and ‘the’ or add a period after ‘sky’ and make the rest of the sentence stand on its own. Accept should be except because accept means take something offered while except is a grammatical word that indicates the only person or thing that does not apply to a statement just made.

A good example of both is:
She wanted to accept his offer, but she couldn’t for fear of angering her father.
He took everything off the shelf except for the blue figurine in the corner.

Try to remember the proper way of using words that sound the same, but have different meanings. They’re called homophones. Mixing up words like that is an easy mistake, but it bugs a lot of people and disrupts the flow of the story.

There should be a comma between Thundera and except/accept. This sentence:
Even the ThunderCats were readying themselves for a night rest almost doesn’t make any sense. Perhaps try rewording it as:
Even the ThunderCats were readying themselves for a good night’s rest.

In the second paragraph, just needs to be capitalized since you’re starting a new sentence and you should place a comma between opened and the. And put a period at the end of the sentence. Capitalize figures since Tygra is now speaking and try putting your punctuation inside the quotation marks. If you read books, then you should know that authors always put punctuation inside the quotations, not on the outside.

There needs to be either a comma or a period after Mandora’s face fills the screen. I’m sorry, I can’t sit through this whole chapter. You need someone to look this over for grammar errors and beta it. Think about getting a beta. This story is hard for me to get through without becoming irritated at all the grammatical errors.