God, I still want this fanfic to continue so bad. One of the best I've ever read that hasn't been finished.

I know you said something about writing yourself into a corner here, but I honestly do not see it. So far it had been a wonderful ride with a whole LOT of room for potential. ESPECIALLY with the newest segment about Fu. I hope that, maybe one day, you'll finish both this story, and the other you so chose to rewrite. You are a wonderful author and I hope to be as creative as you one day.

I'm sorry but I have to agree , why are thesedemon lords" so afraid of breaking human laws

The idea of the most powerful beings in existence obeying vows thought up by the very same humans they practically despise is ridiculous and completely illogical. Honestly ruined the storyline in this chapter.

good story I liked from beginning to end, \ (* u *) /, hahahaha I hope to read more great stories like this ... see you, bye!

I really, really like how you started this. It's well paced and really, well written. I'm glad I found it and I can't wait to see where you take us. I'm excited to see how the rest of the members of the pairing are added to the mix. Seeing the way everything has been put together far I can only imagine that it's gonna be a pretty wild ride.

Come on, don't abandon this strange story, it's good so far, I would like to see many like this one in the future

esta historia es asombrosa con un enfoque mas historico real hasta ahora un fanfic de esta naturaleza nunca me llamaba la atencion terminarlo pero este es el primero por favor continua realizandola.

So has this story been discontinued?

This is great, why did you feel the need to rewrite it?

I don't see how you wrote yourself into a wall. There are still many unknowns, such as how Naruto and Tayuya will interact, and the past relations of Naruto and Fu, as well as how they'd deal with Akatsuki. There is still much that can happen. Writing yourself into a wall is what Master of Genjutsu did. If you don't like how this is turning out and want to reimagine it, that's very different, and acceptable, but there's no need to lie.

I hope to see this story continue

hi there
i really like reading this story it was good to read

now that was a bit too fast lol

this look intresting