All of the nightmare/dream scenes for Roy have been great, but this last one takes the cake. I swear I could feel the helplessness and fear in those lines. Keep up the great work!

I know that you're an adult by now and you might find your old writing a bit cringey, but I find this story really fun and if you ever feel like picking it up again, I'd be happy to read it! Stay safe and have a great day

love this parent Roy all the was, cant believe ed didn't tell him he was ill because it didn't not want him to respace his mother so cute.

I do like Fullmetal Alchemist is was an anime that introduces me to bad words like DAMM it and fuck you and asshole. I just heard that a live action movie will be on Netflix hopefully it not like the dragon ball one that nobody likes. Anyway please continue with this story I really like the plot I just read you other story I really like it.

I hope you pick this up again, I know it's been a few years but I love your stories!

Aw, man, I sure do hope you'll finish it one day. I enjoy it so much!

Ahhhh I love this series and I hope you finish it

I know this is really old and probably abandoned but just wanted you to know I just found this and I love it!

Hello
I really enjoyed reading this so please I beg you continue ! This is one of my favourite fanfic about parental royed !
You are very talented and very funny to read ! Some scenes were so good I found myself screaming with laughter alone in my bedroom !
I wish you good luck for finishing this !

I really love your work and hope that some day it get to continue more. I have already read other fic of yours and really love them, especially family Roy and Ed. So Thankyou for this!

Thank you for writing this much. It's a shame it's uncompleted, because it's a very enjoyable read!

T.T

Usually I wouldn’t even bother reading an unfinished doc, but after recently reading its prequel, I knew that anything written here would be gold. You didn’t disappoint, except for the fact that it has remained unfinished for so long. But at least I had the satisfaction of seeing our two boys take a few victories this round. I certainly hope you return to this story some day. You definitely have a great talent.

I really want to see some extremely hurt Ed and worried Roy. I would love to see the Colonel worried about losing Ed, remembering all the good and bad times and the little antics they got up to - like Ed cheating at cards, giving Roy cute puppy dog eyes that Roy would never really admit to giving into, taking care of Ed when he was sick, his regret when he mentioned Ed's sleeping habits, how he embarrassed and upset the boy when he did so...

I can imagine Ed being severely wounded and needing medical attention while Roy tries to stop the bleeding as he cradles Ed in his arms and lap. So cute. Parental Royed is adorable!

Ed is the best of them all; he's smarter than any of the other sons combined and he began alchemy when he was like, five years old or less.