update

Update! ._. Meow lol Its pretty obvious its a hatelove-hatelove relationship. Like a teasing love xD

Hey is there going to be another chapter up soon? Keep up the great work :)

I love this plot, but I have to point out a few mistakes. :( Coincidence has an 'i' where you put your first 'e.'
Scorchfur's last words should be written like this:
"I've seen her now," were his last words before he ran into the forest, leaving Ivypool extremely confused.
You may not have noticed what I changed.
Anyway, great story, love ya, and keep it coming! :)

Your conversations are so real and they make you like the characters. One problem. When Ivypool says "But who know's what really goes on in their twisted minds!" 'Know's' is incorrect. It isn't actually a word, but if it were it would be a contraction, which means when simplified 'know is.' There shouldn't have been a '. Sorry for nitpicking! ;)
I await the next chapter!

While the skirmish was good, Ivypool's connection with Scorchfur is a bit forced and sudden. Another thing, not trying to be mean, but 'each other' is not one word. Some punctuation is askew, but, as a whole, it's pretty good. Your imagery is superlative! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ah I love it :) I adopted from tr1xx777 too so I'm trying to support all the authors who are writing out her ideas! Ah Scorchfur you sneaky little bugger! I honestly love Scorchfur so much and I might write a story about him in the future :) Update soon!

This is actually QUITE romantic! When's the next chappie gonna come out?

Yay an update! It's good but you need to make it longer. That's one of my big things and I can promise you'll get a lot more reviews if you lengthen it.

Hey sorry it took me forever to respond but I love this! It's really adorable but if you made the chapters a tad bit longer, it'd be even better :) keep going and I'll be sure to review the next chapter as well.

This is a really nice start. I was tempted to adopt this story when I first saw it, but then I adopted Carried Away instead. Anyways, I was wondering who would end up taking this one, and I'm glad that it's someone to seems to know how to write a good story :)

I'm favoriting and following. Keep up the great work!