The story was really good. I loved the overall character development throughout the chapters, and the way that the story progresses is on point. This was a really good read that I couldn't put down after I started. This sort was one of those that the chapters aren't too long, or too short, and how everything is revealed at the right time; enough to keep us interested while not making it boring by giving out too much away. This has become my new favorite Harry/Draco story and honestly deserves more recognition.

Amei sua fic! Amo estórias veela! A sua é super diferente! O plot é muito original! Eu não li eu bebi sua fic! Kkkkkkkk... Mesmo que tenha feito isso tristemente com a ajuda de um tradutor por que não sei ler em inglês, por que sou brasileira e só falo e escrevo em pt-br! Rsrsrsrs... Parabéns! Você escreve muito bem! Esperando mais fics Darry maravilhosas assim em 2020!

This was an interesting story. Not my favorite Veela story, but it was still good.

This is such a well written story! The language, the characters, everything. Well done

I really enjoyed this story, thankyou for writing it xxx

narcissa i fukin liKED YOU but now you have to pull this shit

MAYBE you're just SWITCHING.

Literally 0 of the problems I thought would be solved in this story are solved but I’m strangely okay with it.

This was a very well written and you make nice character development. Though honestly I thought the story would have been better if the bond had stayed broken and the two of them could have only fallen in love naturally. I did like that Harry maintained his independence and never became submissive and even the fact that they honestly had to work to repair the bond was good. This is just personal preference but to me the use of the bond cheapens the actual relationship, makes it less real and more on instinct. Rather than Harry slowly develop the bond as he did, I think it would have been more romantic for Draco LOSE the actual bond that he had altogether and realize that he was in love with Harry anyway.
However, it was nice that built an actual partnership and that you showed that Harry doesn't have to bottom all the time but they can be partners in bed as well. I also liked that you had Ron supporting them and Hermione more on the fence, in a lot of stories I read its the other way around with Hermione immediately feeling that nothing can or should break a bond and her often berating Harry for not giving it a chance. However, I found our version more believable with the characters, particularly with Ron's reason for wanting a veela bond himself and Hermione fearing it would be abusive to a submissive to give up their independence. Anyway, criticism aside I did like this story a lot

I'm disappointed that Harry isn't going to be an Auror. I love to see stories where submissive Harry isn't submissive and yet more often than not within a few chapter, he becomes exactly that. I hope this isn't the first sign that Harry is going to eventually cave to all of Draco's demands. Personally I always found Draco to have the more submissive personality and it would interesting to see that play out despite what Draco thinks 'should' happen

that was adorable! love it!

Great story

Keep writing as life allows

Maybe Harry should meet with a submissive?

Aw, such a great ending! Amazing story !

About ten more of your stories left for me to read!

Splendid!