| Reviews for In A Heartbeat |
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   Looking Glass Reflection chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 I love this story and have read it more then once. I really think u should write more Xyber 9 stories that relate to this one. |
| cantspell chapter 1 . 8/13/2008 hi, i'm new to doing all this so please bair with me...ok, #1- you stuck well as to how the characters spoke and acted. #2- you gave them a good understanding of a soldier's honor and thoughts. #3- you gave good detail to the environmemt around them. #4- you came up with a good story, of good length...not to long, or drawn out and not to short ,or rushed. you put so thought behind what you wanted to do and it came out great. i tell ya what.. i love to read , i love to make up storys but that dont mean i should. keep on with the writing! I LIKED IT VERY MUCH! ! ! ! |
| Drumming-Femme chapter 1 . 9/12/2003 cool |
| MelaSarai00 chapter 5 . 6/2/2003 Great finale! I have to say, I really liked the conclusion, and I'm curious if you're going to have another confrontation between the assassin & Jack-her past sounds nice & dark. It's stories like this that make braving the wilds of FF.N worth it. |
| MagRowan chapter 5 . 5/15/2003 Yeay! I like the ending! Thank you very much for finishing the story! _ Love it, hon! :) |
| shadowwolf75 chapter 5 . 4/30/2003 Yay, it's finished! This last chapter turned out really well, and everybody got a happy ending, even the assassin. And since they are going to see her again, I suppose this means there's gonna be a sequel? |
| MagRowan chapter 4 . 3/27/2003 Like the story hon! You're a great writer. I'm also currently going through the Magician fics as well. :) I like your storytelling style. It certainly draws a person in! Waiting for more on this story! Don't leave it hanging, please! _ |
| MelaSarai00 chapter 4 . 2/12/2003 Finally, I can review it! This was great-the action scenes were well done, with the breaks feeling like scene edits in a TV episode. And I like that you're doing some stuff with Ana's people in the process. This is great-one of those stories that gets better & better, keeping you reading. |
| Dalliann chapter 4 . 1/24/2003 Great chapter! You write action sequences so well- they're perfectly paced and described so vividly. I also liked how you incorporated Ana's origins into the story. Now I'm dying to read the next part! :) -Dalliann |
| shadowwolf75 chapter 4 . 1/24/2003 Whee, it seems like each chapter of this is better than the last . . . keep up the good work! |
| MelaSarai00 chapter 3 . 12/16/2002 Great chapter-loved the swordfight! I'm dying to see where you're gonna take this; the assassin's shaping up to be a very interesting character. |
| shadowwolf75 chapter 3 . 12/15/2002 Wow, this chapter was great! |
| Dalliann chapter 3 . 12/15/2002 Great chapter, my favorite so far! :) Everything that happened was so unexpected- definitely kept me intrigued. And this character of yours is so interesting! Can't wait for the next part! -Dalliann |
| Salmon chapter 2 . 11/18/2002 Wow, I love this! You're really good with the characters; I can't wait to read more! |
| Dalliann chapter 2 . 11/16/2002 My computer FINALLY stopped timing out and I was able to get in here and read your latest chapter- it's wonderful! You've got a great grasp on the personalities of the original cast and this new character you've created is very interesting. Can't wait to read more! -Dalliann |
