Drunk Effie has self-control issues, haha. At least Haymitch has some decency there, no matter how hard it was for him... In every sense of the term ;) I can't wait to see what you have next in this, it's brilliant. I also love the new pen name you chose, and your profile picture makes my heart melt. Good to see you around again xxx

Aww, poor Haymitch. Such a shame for him. ;) Typical of dreams, you wake up right when you're enjoying it. Who knows? He might end up accidentally mentioning this dream to Effie. :P

Your writing is amazing. I really love this story. Your OCs are really good, solid characters, and the way you write them and their interactions with Haymitch and Effie are extremely realistic. It's much easier to read without its coding, too. Really loving your work. xxx

Hi. I'd just like to say that this is amazing. One slight issue is that the HTML format has been written into the story (chapters 2-4) and it's hard to read. I've read everything, though, and I loved it. Your writing is brilliant. If you look through the story and delete the coding, (a pain to do, and a nuisance to have happen to you) it'll make reading it much easier. Excellent work, though. I'm definitely going to add this to my follows ️ love it. xxx