the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.

Welp Deathwing is here game over

It's just info dump after info dump.

Great story

I'm so confused

I'm confused, you said naruto lost his memories but he was able to use shadow clones. How would he know how to use them if he lost his memory? And how did the assassin use shadow clones? I feel like there is a bit of a hole in the story. Other than that this is a good fic keep up the good work.

Nice chap though somewhat confusing background and plot

Nice Ace Ventura reference

Nice chap

Interesting chap, is this pet of a series or a stand alone?

Nice chap, still not sure how I feel about it yet

Interesting start, not sure how I feel about it yet

All the Naruto fanfiction sucks .

I've read the entire first chapter, and I got to say, there are many things that I need to say right now. Don't get me wrong, the premise of the story is intriguing, and I'm interested in the prospect of Naruto becoming the knight to save the damsels in distress. HOWEVER, what really bothers me is the GRAMMER, and the overall structure of your WRITING. It's all over the damn place, and I had to stop my eyes from going inside out because of the incorrect past and present tenses you misplace. It's clearly obvious that English isn't your first language, and a beta is possibly required to help fix the jumbling mess in your current and future chapters. Anyway, try to take a step back and improve your writing for next time. Have a nice day!

Learn English, Or write in your own language. This is painful to read