I love this! Simple, restrained and absolutely beautiful.

WOOHOOOOO YES AWESOME

All your stories I've read so far on here and on AO3 have been absolutely brilliant! I'm looking forward to reading more of yours that you've already written and any new ones that you will write.
Once again, you done a wonderful job with River and Rose. No ridiculous and unneeded bashing or mud throwing. You have two lovely ladies in love with the same man, there's going to be some hurt feelings. You capture that quite nicely with having River being bitter, upset, and admitting that it would be so easy to hate Rose, but she doesn't. Same wonderful job with Rose as well with her being a tad suspicious about River's agenda, being curious about his reaction to seeing her again, the embarrassment and shame from it, and the being hopeful about seeing him again and the possibility of going home. I love that you have them after airing feelings and events that they like each other. I find that they could/can be great friends, having a good deal in common. River was rather selfless in coming up with the idea. She knows she's going to die soon, but she doesn't want the Doctor to be alone, and just wants him to be happy. She knows that Rose will love him, make him happy and take care of him, after River's gone.

I like how you had her talking to Tony, before seeing River. Having that aspect of her life, and knowing that he's all the family she has left in the parallel world. He does know her so well. Poor Amy and Rory were left on babysitting the Doctor, and putting up with his pacing and tinkering. The Doctor does look awful. I do love Amy! She has a good grasp on how to handle both her boys. The Doctor's reunion with Rose was absolutely splendid. Its exactly as I imagine they'd be after being separated for so long. I love you end the story with him uttering her name. Well done.

Aw that was so sweet! I totally follow the headcannon that River and Rose would get along super well even though they are so different. Thank you so much it was lovely :)

I want something as a sequel to this one...something that involves the Doctor knocking Rose up.

You should write a sequel!

I so believe that this could have been canon, and I still dance the happy dance over the official handbook. YOU ARE THE MOST GIFTED WRITER 5ever.

Me encanta!

Get over Rose Tyler. That ship has sailed long ago and I'm sure he'd tell you so himself if he were real.

Aww :) Happy little ending

Loved it!

Oh the feels!
Both of these have squeezed my little heart. I've been reading too much angsty fic, and it's making me feel like a big moping mess, then watching 2 episodes last night before bed, and you see how much love he feels for Rose on his face , and it's so much, like you're almost a voyeur, and...and ... I digress.
Little overwhelmed with the Doctor/Rose feels, I'm going to lie down now.

I love it :)

awesome :)

omg tha twas great I love that river just perfect