i love this with all of my being!

i am really excited for this.

is rin going to be kidnapped as well, and magecraft, will they be learning it?
i saw that you had updated recently and it filled me with so much hope i need to feel the love of this.
your rider is on point, literally like it's canon, scary good.

please make more of this. i need to see illya
i want to see shirou become worthy of being a king.
big happy family!

Well, at least you're still around. How've you been? COVID giving you trouble?

This is fun!

Good story so far, but will you ever update A Spartan in Westeros (A Song of Ice and Fire X Halo Crossover)

that last scene with shirou was absolutely adorable! loved it. i really want to see illya be saved in this fic. she has bad endings in nearly every route.
want to see the adults' reactions to shirou being an incarnation and possessing a reality marble. though i believe his marble would be a lot different in this fic from the canon ubw, what with the influence from iskander. i bet waver and emiya will be both exasperated and alarmed- with iskander as a role model and shirou's work ethic the ubw and sword incarnation thing, that's just overkill lol. iskander would just be like "as espected of my son!"

Nice

Honestly, Waver and Iskandar are the perfect keys to a newly improved Holy Grail War. The way Kariya's legacy lives on, even in death, is enough to make me cry. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I need you to know that you are a wonderful person. I thought about this concept, when to try to find a story with a plot like this and there at the top of list, without having entered a single filter, was your story.

There are no mages left of the Einzbern. Kiritsugu would have known that. They're a "family" of homunculi originally created by the Einzbern mages, and abandoned by the same when they all gave up on their goal. But the homunculi are all just living meat dolls at heart, and stubbornly carried on where the the humans left off. Robots making more robots in pursuit of the only goal they have ever known.

a great chapter that last scene was pretty amusing.

I love how responsible Shirou is.

Keep it up :)

Another really good chapter and it seems that our group has made up their minds and a strategy. Let's see how it unfolds. However, I am curious. Is Waver not going to take up the El Melloi name and become a teacher? If not, is he at least going to save Gray before the fifth war starts? Hopefully so. Love Gray and her little crush on her sensei XD.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

It's nice to see the three gentlemen are planning to do something about how storming the snowy castle and busted Illya out of prison. It rather sweet to see Shirou cleaning after the three men when they were asleep, can't wait when he and Sakura met Illya in the future.

been reading your story for a while now and I have to say I love it.

this chapter has to be my favourite, it shows how Rider adopts Shirou reveals what happened to Sakura after she was rescued. I really enjoyed how both Shirou and her both met, guess in this they'll be surrogate siblings in a way. still I can't help but ask some questions.

1. what will become of Rin, Sakura's older sister? (would she become an ally? and/or reunite with her sister)

2. will Raida help Kiritugu rescue illyasviel from the einzberns? (would be looking forward to see that)

3. what will become of Shinji Matou? (I'm only asking since without zouken & sakura wants to become of him)

4. if it comes to the fifth grail war, how would Saber react to Rider raising Shirou, and would the king of conquerors explain to her why kiritsugu ordered her to destroy the grail and would they forge a alliance.

and finally 5. would Rider & Waver make any allies in prep for the 5th holy grail war?

thats all me questions had ask and I'll wait for answers I need to know.