Very good. However not sure why Mr Carson waited 8 weeks to consummate their marriage? was expecting an explanation. Really well written though as always.

Beautiful beyond words ️

Thanks for sharing your talent with this wonderful gem. I've enjoyed your Chelsie fics so much. I loved how these two finally found their way to each other in their marriage and have a fulfilling retirement in their future.

Just read this for the first time now. So lovely, I really enjoyed it.

Wow. That was lovely - it was touching and revealing and a satisfying conclusion to this sweet story. Thank you again for doing what you do so very well!

Favorite bits include Elsie's... unbuttoning, exposing, lifting, unhooking, sliding and slipping! YEAH BABY! *winks* but so lovely to have made friends - that also made me smile! Thank you!

*fist bumps to my chest* got me right in the FEELZ with this one... unexpected but delightful! ... have I told you lately that you're Fantastic?! ... you are!

Smutty yes - but lovingly smutty! *giggles* :) thanks for the warning - that was cute and... appropriate! ha! This is sweet - my sincere and gracious thanks to you for sharing your awesomeness

Hi there - so... what I loved best about this chapter!? - your timing - the silences and glances and smiles that you include. They were very much a part of what we saw of their relationship and helps make this so much sweeter! :) Thank you!

SO glad you're a part of this fandom! ... SO grateful that you are inspired and creative enough to write this as sweetly as you did! SO grateful I can zoom through the chapters! *giggles* Love your naughtiness! May you continue to be blessed and continue to share your talents with us all! :)

I love that I can just go onto the next chapter but *fans self* whooo girl! you definitely made the room a bit warmer with this chapter! He finally cops a feel ... and TBC! *winks* ya tease!

You're so cute! So I picked a story to read and I have to say - I love your author's notes - not because I needed to know things but because you are willing to share things, information, music, inspiration, ideas... and I love them! This chapter was like a glimpse into the Chelsie we WANTED to see during S6!

Lovely as always.

Love this first chapter. your commentaries are usually just as enjoyable. I could ofger u useless info on my grandmother (and maybe how she bathed) buy I never knew either of them. Thanks for sharing a bit of yours.

Not sure how many read throughs I've done with this story but it is so lovely and so in character for them both. I love the tentative steps towards intimacy in the beginning. A classic read!