This story is great and deserves more reviews

I know who she is. She's a self insert, that's who she is.

This is epic! I really can't wait to read the sequel! :D

I think this story has the potential to be good, but Akari is just another Mary Sue. She’s at her first year at the academy and within the first day she gets moved up. Like, there’s nothing wrong with a powerful OC, but if you want readers to enjoy it you have to give her some flaws in order to make her realistic. Also, please try to fix your grammar and punctuation because it makes it frustrating to read.

you hv no idea how grateful i am to discover your creativity!

Sakura is my bias all the time even tho l know she acted like the villagers toward Naruto but l tend to ignore the cons and focus on the pros so this was a great reminder that even if it my favourite it has also bad side or something like that. I still would be glad if the two of them become sort of rivals.

Is your story already editing or not? Because I found some spelling mistake and wrong grammar. Hopefully you could edit it fast so that all your fans can read in peace without problem in the future.

Aw, is a certain Uchiha jealous? Poor Naruto and Akari, they can't meet each other again. Thank you.

Loved your story , now favourited!

This is terrible. I gave it a six chapter grace period, but it was still terrible by chapter 6. Your writing style uses words to the point where they don't even sound right in context anymore. God, if I didn't know any better, I'd think you were Stephenie Meyer. I don't understand why people make uchiha ocs then pair them with sasuke. That's called incest sweetie. Maybe its because you want to bone that emo twink in his sleep but still want the natural talent some uchiha have. This is blatant wish fulfilment, and not even in a passable way. Next time, skip the self wank and add a little bit of plot.

I love it, I hope the second part be amazing, take care and regards.

Next, please.
xoxo

wow, absolutely amazing!
i loved your story so much and i cant wait for the continue:)
well done my friend , well done for an amazing story...

Oh dang! Where is the second part? I so enjoyed this story and characters o.o it was so great .

I love the story.
Next, please.
Akari/Sasuke 3
xoxo