Aww, sweet. A little fast and lacking a professional tone, but hey, that's what fanfic is for! I really enjoyed the Hicstrid.

It was great! I loved it

Best song on the earth! I loved it! Great job!

Finally the second chapter! Awesome!

OK don't tell me when you update or anything. haha :P

Both are good chapters. Any more?

uy mi mente pervertida esta andando al maximo.
es hermoso

Haha blonde and blue eyes...why not brunette and light brown eyes. JK JK but still i liked the story.

Does no one realise that this fanfic is like kinda like the song play it again? (The country one not the other one)

Awwww so cute but i think lots can be done with this story so u should realy tingk about mor chapters

This was really well written. I think it would benefit you to expand this story. You're a good writer, and you could do a lot with this story. It'd be interesting to see how their relationship will grow

A little weird how nobody saw hiccup kissing astrid

This chapter is great ! Keep on going!