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LordTicky chapter 9 . 1/5/2019
I'm glad that you liked my idea enough to go through with it! Fetch's abilities required a great deal more accuracy in the games, so it makes sense that she'd be the only one with enough control to pull it off. I don't know if you intend to add to this story any more in the future, but if so I shall eagerly look forward to it!
LordTicky chapter 8 . 12/13/2018
The circle is almost complete. Now we need to see Fetch trying to cook several things at once using her powers. Maybe as a twist have her be the only one to successfully do it?
o8g98 chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Veri n1c3TC0st0riuP
GoliathPyroson chapter 8 . 3/27/2018
This is amazing, i love it
CHARLES MANSON chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
1~ NO
2~ WAT
3~ KYS
4~ WAT
5~ WHY
6~ THAT'S ILLEGALLL
Cursed Aesahaettr chapter 7 . 8/26/2015
Really love this fic! It's adorable and super fluffy~ You've got a grade A story going here. I want to say this is the first time I've seen emphasis on polyamory in a ship which I personally love. All three conduit cuties really complement each other well and you write each character accurately.

If I had to think of a request... For either Delgene or Delgenetch, they happen to be out on the town when a stranger starts flirting with one of them - probably Delsin in either scenario - and Eugene and/or Fetch get jealous. They could try to flirt around to make Delsin jealous too or even mope to him about him "cheating" on them. Delsin would end up having to calm them down and reassure them that they aren't in any danger of being replaced. Roles could of course be reversed to fit needs or for entertainment value. c:
agames1378 chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Hello!
I'm From Argentina and this is the first fanfic in english i(My english is very bad sorry) But i like very much.
Anon723723723 chapter 6 . 1/24/2015
Aw! Another bunch of cute ones! My only real critiques is that you focus on Eugene and Delsin WAY more than Fetch. Plz more Fetch!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Kinda want to see Eugene teaching delsin how to use a lesser form of he who dwells ( delsin would be demon like souly because it would be badass) and maybe fetch teaching delsin a thing or to.

The coundiouts basically go into heat causing there powers to slightly manifest delsin is smoking from his arms and shoulders fetch has neon dancing over her skin and Eugene has wings, hard core yet loving smex and smexyness ahead

Delsin's brother managed to survive because he was a dormant water coundiout and now needs to be walked through how to control his powers from his brother and both his girlfriend and boyfriend (he finds the situations awkward both his coundiout power and his brothers romantic relationships)
LTMFL chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Literal best delgene fic ever.
Cant Log In D chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STUFF 'o'
Omg, can you please make one in which Delsin just wants to cuddle. (Lets assume only Eugene is home) So Fetch comes home and just finds Delsin sleeping on Eugene's chest... If you cant its okay
Guest chapter 5 . 8/14/2014
Sooooo family time or something to do with delson's tribe?
andrewjameswilliams chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
Nice story.

Might I suggest in the next update you take them out of Seattle for a little bit. Maybe have them attending some big to-do at the Akomish longhouse.
PineApple-Hut chapter 5 . 7/29/2014
Omfgggggggg! XD

SO SMEXY! XD

I have two words for you:

! :3
PineApple-Hut chapter 4 . 7/24/2014
I would totally LOVE it if Delsin and Eugene were my BF's

And Fetch my best friend! :3

And I would love to have powers too... XD

Btw Lol I like this chapter...
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