Interesting story i still find it kind of sad im not sure why though

its a sad story,
and 'scary' at the same time.
it is very sad for Luffy for his lost of his family... I cried at that part,
and about the siren eye's part,it send shiver through my body.
and about the dreams, at first I thought It was Luffy's dreams not Law's.
in the end of the story,
it just "BANG" your explanations hit me,
and my suspicious feeling about Luffy earlier is true... yeah slightly true.
you know what I think the first time Law saw Luffy?

I thought Luffy is a ghost or a spirit from the siren's eyes,
haha..Lol

hmm by the way where's your idea about the siren's eyes come from..?
I'm just curious...that's all...
somehow it's remind me of my favorite movie,,..
"pirates of the Caribbean on stranger tides"
haha Lol...

thanks for sharing...
:D

I enjoyed this weird piece, as you say. Ah, this takes me back to those tales from the Pet Shop of Horrors! Sort of... I mean, this fic does have that kind of feel.

Anyway, awesome fic!

And here I thought I was going to read a happy-go-lucky story. Apparently not though, but it still was great! XD I thought they died tho at the end so was about to cry until I read the explanation. Great story! Really liked it.

KYAAAAA! I absolutely LOVED this! I had a hunch about half-way through the story that Luffy was a siren. I was wrong, but sorta close! XD But aw, that was a lovely story and it was very well written. The scenes you described in the dreams were beautiful!

Loved this a lot, fantastic! :D

Hooo damn I really like this a lot! ;;w;; It gives me sort of an unknown chill but for sure, this is really beautiful and eerie at the same time (or at least for me) but you did have an interesting take on this idea so yeah, once again I have to say this is really lovely!

I found Law's dreams, the call, very unnerving.. their love was so cute till it started reaching it's end, then it started toying with my emotions. Did Luffy really turn Law or did he devour him? Not knowing what really happened is horrible yet perfect. I don't want to know haha.
Great work! And lovely writing. Thank you for sharing. :)

well, wow that was awsome

this is a classic in my book... very nice...

my friend suggested this story, and you stabbed me in the heart with feels... thanks anyway. You're a great writer!

Djssismd I fucking loved it! God I love your stories you have no idea how giddy and super excited I get whenever I see you uploaded a story, seriously though I loved this! It was just wow one of my favorites

WOW! AMAZING DESU!
o/w/o

well how about lemon? Two male mermaid making out and coupling? I always wonder how mermaids do it. So you should better explain it to me. As for Law dated Sanji? Where is that coming from? But the story was good like always loved it. Now Lemon please...

Omg sunny, you're a genius mystery writer! Like, seriously! ! And I loved how much you described the surroundings! 3 -