Reviews for Enkindled Souls
MollyMoooo chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
Please make more! It's really cute!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Really late to the party on this one but I enjoyed this start to a story very much. Sad to see that it hasn't updated in two years so I guess that 3 part story is dead in the water but what can you do.

I liked how you handled all the characters, they were all quite in line with the show. Also Shelby is fucking wonderful, always nice to see him show up in a story. I like that he's apparently so close to Finn that he's helping Jake oversee wedding preparations.
The Finn and PB scene was nice, I could definitely see Finn being super nervous and PB being there to calm his nerves is very sweet.
I wonder if Marceline and Ice King would have showed up.

Sad that this was killed before its time but should you ever get around to continuing it I would be very interested.
Erika chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
I'd love to see you continue this. I really love your voice.
Deu2Ex chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Oh my god, everything looks ok and good, the summary, the setting and even the characters are making me laugh(Shelby was just amazing jaja)...so with all that why do I feel so nervous? I mean I kind of have read a little of your other AT works and they are while really good also REALLY sad.
For what i've seen you take all the real feelings and comflict of the show and remove all the humor usually mixed in, and it ends again while amazing also very dark.
How did FP and Finn made up? Did they even really made up or is something else going on!? My god too many recent dark fics and showstoo much paranoia.
Anyways thank you for the story and I hope you finish it.
David D chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
I Love it. More pls!
InsomniaandBoredom chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
You should definitely continue.
OMAC001 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
I can already tell this will be a WEDDING TO REMEMBER! ...In every sense of the word! Please update soon! This might be the only chance at the real thing!
GalacticAura chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
I love love love
Love LOVE this story! It's so interesting to see another writer's thoughts after writing my own story. When you described the wedding area, I was thinking to myself, "Chlor's ring would be around in the corner over there.." From my story. :D you should do a little backstory after this so we know how Finn proposed. :P not to sound greedy
adventurerOreo chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I think i'll love this story. And why did they break them up, though don't think they would've ended up making them get married, 'cause after all it is a cartoon.
Theonewhodidnotdoit chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Brilliant idea, brilliant writing, brilliant buildup, just awesome. This is great stuff, can't wait to see more. Update as soon as you can!
Ooobserver chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Excellent, utterly well-crafted, and full of nice details and the works. I really hope this is continued.
randomreader chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
MAKE IT PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!
Broken In7 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Yes! What a great dream story! I still believe that they will get back together. But you know have much of a killjoy doubt it is no matter how small. It's stories like this that help. I hope you continue this story.
Roberto chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Amazing chapter! Loved it! Update soon!
Fiery Crusader chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
This was actually pretty good! Shelby certainly doesn't care at all especially when he made that last remark lol. The humor was great, it truly is. I couldn't stop laughing for 5 mins from all the inside jokes.

Anyway, you have my support and words of encouragement if you're planning on extending this. Great work!
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