I have to agree about the trope about them always being at "Training Ground 7" In other fics. it is a rather worn and overdone thing. Especially since it is clearly stated the Bell Test for Canon Team Seven happened at the Third Training Ground. Google Naruto Wiki Bell Test and you will see so at the bottom.

my . mmo
mmk

continue this masterpiece called literature

fuck ya a twist my heart is beating so ferousciously

Yay! One, no, 3 points for Jiji!

I wish you'd come back to this.

Why is it that doo many stories add gays for no real reason and make sure their gayness is mentioned EVERY. SINGLE. CHAPTER? I mean, for Pete's sake, she had a crush on Naruto to the point where being in the same booth made her blush. Next chapter: Hinata likes females!

reading what is a dead fic cause I remember it being so good kinda pisses me off

Needs an update not enough serious Naru/Kure fics out there

It's a great story!

sorry to say but writing fights is not your thing
pretty much all of them came of as incredibly weak

kurenai - exausted after doing 3 genjutsu
naruto - completly worn out (and somehow out of chakra without using any) after one move
Kushimaru - dead after doing nothing at all

okay I'ma say this right now Naruto as soon as he put on the headband was considered an Adult old enough to kill drink fuck and smoke

chapter 1, just after the second line break.
"... but he had way too many starched in his diet for a prospective shinobi"
this is a minor error, it should be "he had way too much starch in his diet"

Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update if it comes at all since given how long it has been since you last updated you may have given up on the story I hope that is not the case.

Dude... Your story is good,... But it would have been much better if you had not focused so much on the HinaHaku part... People just drift off at that point, people read this story because the summary interests them, so try and stick to that. Peace.