This was unbelievably cute!

XD XD XD

How brilliant! Cutely funny, insightfully deep and.. brilliant! Loved it!

This is genius!

*snicker snicker* Sounds like Classic Neal and Peter. I love it!

An excellent piece of writing. You really captured the relationship between Peter and Neal which is so father and son it isn't real...or big much older brother and little brother...Lovely. I truly enjoyed reading this and will now go on to see if you've written anymore...thanks for the ride.

I love this story! It was a little OOC but in a nice and adorable way! i love Peter being gentler and more understanding.

Oh this was great! Love it!

Omg I'm literally dying. That is hysterical. They are the best and it really helps that the writing was so creative and on point too. :) I just loved everything about this. It wasn't just humor, there was real emotion there too and that is what made it as awesome as Peter. lol.
Thanks for sharing this!
P.s. - you know what else would be awesome? A ch. 2 :D Just throwing it out there.

Very cute and funny. Poor Neal sounded like he really could have used a Ketel One.

your stories are so epic. they ooze all the fluff and Puppy!Neal and Protective!Peter that i could desire from each episode and each fanfic :D
Keep writing! Its great; going through your archive of wc fics now :P

Thank you for another great story! Love these little scenes from Neal's early days with Peter.

Very funny little story.

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Neal may love the car, but I love the story.

That was for making me smile.